Kylie

@whalekeeper

That looks so good, I love how the face is so simple but clean, it looks like it belongs in a picture book.

Made a fun artsy thing tonight! My drawing frustrations feel a lot better now. (Ignore the weird space above)

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon I did not make up the minerals, they are real. But I have worldbuilt to the point where I can guess what’s there cuz of location history. XD I’ve toyed with the idea of researching certain materials.

Hugo

“Huh.” Hugo absently arranged the rocks into a circle on his desk. “I was always a bit of a role-player. I’d p…[Read more]

@loopylin @elishavet-pidyon (Hi!)

Hugo

It was funny to see what the book said about each mineral. It said the corpse crystal was uncommon, which didn’t make sense at all. Hugo also identified the magnetite and schreibersite without much trouble. Magnets and meteorites collected where he lived. The thought turned into a mixed feeling as he…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @loopylin

Hugo

“Odd number of people.” Hugo settled onto the dark oak seat next to Victor. When he saw some of the students nervously covering their mouths as they mixed and matched substances, he took his scarf and pulled it over his freckled nose. His voice came out muffled. “Ah, you said… I want to guess. Is it corpse…[Read more]

I should say spring. Where I am, you really only get an extended autumn and then switch right back to summer, so May just feels like summer.

@keilah-h

That’s what I was getting at. XD They have Christmas stuff even in early summer.

@theducktator

*Slides in* Do you go to Hobby Lobby often?

Wait, you commented with your email already? Slay

@savannah_grace2009

😆 <3<3 Ideas are my bread and butter, sister. (Well, the writing part? Eehhhhhh not so much but who can blame me am I right?)

I will be on here for the next couple hours while I plot a little thingy on the family computer. This is my time to do that while the house goes dark. My email will be on my profile during that time,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok thank you!!

I was thinking there needed to be more family interaction too. I’m glad you caught that. Is there a certain spot on the book that you think those types of scenes would fit best? (If not, that’s fine)

Ok yes!! I will for sure do that! It will be fun for me to take time to flesh out the characters individually…[Read more]

@grcr @savannah_grace2009

Thank you girls so much for reading through my book and supporting me!! 💕💕 I so so so appreciate you! ❤️

Your comments have given me a lot more confidence in the plot and characters, which I definitely needed going into a third draft.

Are there any scenes you’d like to see added? Or characters you’d like to see mor…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Hey giiirrl. :] I’d love to brainstorm with you. I’m going out for lunch right now but I’ll be back home in a couple hours and we can exchange emails!

@ellette-giselle

K!

It looks good! The blurb size and length seems right, too.

@loopylin

Yeeaah, I’ve been bad with the roleplays too. I’ve been busy, I suppose. Stay-at-home vacation with the family and getting together with friends before they go to college.

@rae

Happy birthday!!! That sounds like a super cool outing. I love exploring shops on vacation or whatever, and doing it on a birthday sounds even more fun.

Oof I have to think about this.

@ellette-giselle

Do you want feedback on here or through gmail? (Either’s fine)

@theducktator

Awesome, thank you so much!!