Kylie

@ellette-giselle

Is this POV yours? Real life local mysteries are unironically the best thing ever, unless they involve people getting hurt. I had a missing criminal hanging around my mailbox one time. Those things are the spice of life.

You should research what chemicals might change colors like that.

The image worked! Nice.

@ellette-giselle

Well… we aren’t at the end of the book yet. 🫣

@ellette-giselle

Yay! KP is back!

Good chapters. They made it out of there pretty easily. I thought that was going to be tough…

@ellette-giselle

Wow! That was so tense! I can’t wait for Cassion to tell them!

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much!

I know some of us were discussing this during the book, but I like the idea of showing Sara and Cole’s closer relationship in the beginning of the book. I’m going to look and see if I can insert this into the early chapters.

I see what you mean about Alec being a pretty stagnant character during the book.…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thank you for the concern, it’s so kind of you! Your right on the money, I have noticed I’ve become a bit obsessive/overly scrupulous about things recently, so as you mentioned I will look into OCD.

No problem! 🙃 I hope you find some helpful material. Just let me know if you want me to link some stuff that’s helped me before! Pra…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You’re just going to leave us on that?? 🥺

@ellette-giselle

Aww. Those were good.

@ellette-giselle

I’m scared for them…

@ellette-giselle

Ellette!! What are you going to do to them!? 😳

@ellette-giselle

Oh boy…

Those were great. Didn’t really see anything that needed to be fixed. I like how we get to see both sides of it now.

@everyone

Is it just me or is KP not letting us change our profile pictures :/

I know I haven’t been replying but I’m praying for everyone.

@rae @grcr @esther

Praying for these things! Hoping everything goes well and any emotional struggles will be comforted.

I don’t know how some of you people write romance novels. I have a new respect for y’all, because this is exhausting. Not bad, just exhausting.

@grcr

That’s a lot, haha. I bet many of them are siblings to the protagonists.

@ellette-giselle

Awesome.

Probably good advice. I would, but it’s already in his backstory, and I didn’t want to go back and change it now.

And I mostly just lost it when I realized that this, being a modern real life setting, I couldn’t go sort through or make up the customs and laws myself, like I could for nearly any of my other WIPs.…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Ah, thank you! This is a lot of helpful information.

Okay, so the kid is in Canada at the time (Quebec) as that’s the family residence. I have found a bit of legal stuff for Canada by now, but haven’t started looking into the American side. This is so beautifully concise (which legal documents are definitely not).

This is…[Read more]