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@rochellaine I was gonna ask you; do you wanna tag someone else to do the ‘broken air-conditioner’ poem? my life isn’t letting me work on it much, so I’m afraid it would take forever to finish it.

@filewriterbase13x Oh good!  And I like B-bot. 🙂

@ariel-ashira I like it! 🙂 that poor boy who got his goat taken away……

what genre is your WIP?

@rochellaine @jenwriter17 Okay, here’s from one of my stories…

Joshua’s fists clenched.  The frenzied mob of white-clad bacchantes grabbed the little black goat from the blind boy, who gave a cry and tried to reach his pet.  His mother pulled them both out of reach of the drunken crowd.  The screams and cheers of the bacchantes filled the ni…[Read more]

@rochellaine *looks at empty wallet* i’m just saving my faves to pinterest 🙂 yup, the modesty struggle is real. I actually found quite a few websites that have modest clothing. let me know if you want the list 😉 i probably thought of you cuz some of your writing prompt collages have vintage-y photos. 😉

@skredder, haha. No I don’t know that reference. At least I don’t think so. It does sound familiar, though. Of course, I included you. You asked me too didn’t you? 🙂

@kaya-young, thank you and you’re welcome. Yes, I suppose it does. 🙂

Oh, welcome back @dekreel, oh and she’s gone again. Yes, I would live to add you. I am definitely overstocked…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Oh, I forgot to say that I agree with Rin.  I would have enjoyed it too.  Not that I would necessarily have had the courage to do it… 😛

Well that’s funny. 😀  I wonder where your mind linked me to vintage clothing?  Maybe the fact that I write his-fic?  Oh, Modcloth!  Yes, they’ve got a lot of cute stuff.  My aunt has some clothe…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira Yes, it is 😀

@rochellaine I was just looking at a website modcloth.com, and I though “hmm, maybe Rochellaine likes vintage clothing.” Here’s the link if you wanna check it out (not all the clothing is modest, but there are some cute things 🙂 ): https://www.modcloth.com/

i like the snippet 🙂 poor girl….

@rochellaine Nice!  Does Chara go to the hospital???

@jenwriter17 Thats really cool!  Is that from your book?

I would like to, but I don’t have access to our computer right now, so I am just using notebooks to work on my plot lines and such while I can’t actually be writing the story.

@jenwriter17 Well, you’ve already read most of what I’ve written so far, so here’s what I came up with…

“How do you feel, Chara?” the nurse asked, coming up to Chara’s bed and smiling at her.

“I want to get up,” Chara answered, lifting the corner of her mouth in an attempt to smile back.  Immediately her cheek hurt, and she remembered…

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@ariel-ashira Welcome! we’re sharing WIP snippets if you want to too. 🙂

@rochellaine Okay, here’s one:

  That laugh. It shook Rin’s core and made her shudder. Her ears tingled and her eyes squeezed shut.

  Enough.

  Rin flung an arm out. Her fist hit Takara full on the cheek.

  Takara stumbled back and the soldiers grabbed Rin’s arms. Takara steadied herself and gingerly felt her face. It was already red. “How d…[Read more]

@rochellaine@ jenwriter17 Hi, guys!  I can’t be on long, but maybe for a little if were talking about anything. 🙂

@jenwriter17 Okay.  Your idea, you first. 😛

@rochellaine We can do anything between a couple sentences to a paragraph if you want. 🙂

@jenwriter17 Okay, but I’m not sure exactly what you mean. 😀  Do you mean one or two sentence sections like SeekJustice did in her last post on An Ordinary Pen?

@rochellaine Thank you!  Yeah, his sister was five when he left, and she hardly remembers him.  Also, because of the traumatizing situation they were in for a while when he was taken away, she has hardly spoken for those two years.  My poor little character!

I find it tons of fun, but also difficult to write these very emotional scenes.  I enj…[Read more]

@rochellaine haha “course of” that’s cute! 😉

Yup, my dystopian. 🙂

you wanna share snippets of our WIPs? it’s okay if you don’t want to.