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@seekjustice Do you know a lot of pilot jargon? 😛  I think you said something about knowing a pilot, but I don’t really remember.

Chara is, but Uncle Bill isn’t.  I can’t tell when he’s going to be out of the hospital until I know what’s wrong with him, and at present I have no idea what’s wrong with him. 😛  Poor Uncle Bill!  But anyway, he’…[Read more]

@seekjustice Well, during WWI the pilots could see each other pretty well since the planes weren’t as sealed in as they are now, right?  I’ve read of dogfights where the pilots saw the expressions on their opponents’ faces sometimes.

Well actually right now it’s going okay.  I think. 😛  I’m at a kind of boring part so I’m hoping I can get th…[Read more]

@seekjustice  Dogfights are cool, but I wouldn’t know how to write them either. 😀  Have you read the Tales of the RAF by Don Patterson?

Well, right now I have my stuff on a flash drive  so I’m trying to work on my western from our desktop computer. 🙂

@seekjustice Working on anything at present?

@sarah-anson I struggle with this, too. In my limited experience of struggling to understand the MC of my novel premise, I would say something that’s important would be to get to the heart of this character, to feel their brokenness in the pit of your stomach and be able to relate to that. The main impression I got from your description was that…[Read more]

@seekjustice I’m gonna have to go now. I might be on tomorrow 🙂

@seekjustice I’m back! are you still here?

Oh my goodness I’m sorry @seekjustice! I just popped on and left. Will you be on later?

actually sorry no I can’t write right now. I might be on later though.

@rochellaine @seekjustice @alia @ariel-ashira @skredder Anyone writing?

@sarah-anson Those are so good!!! I especially like the first one 🙂

ooh someone tag me! 😀

@sarah-anson Oh I didn’t know you read it! (or maybe I did but I forgot) 😀 Thank you so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it.

I just gave you access for chapter 6, and the other links should be earlier in this topic. 🙂 thank you!

@skredder Stellar! I should be able to start reading it some time tonight 🙂 I think the pace you’re putting the links out is good, since I’m reading for Seekjustice too.

@ariel-ashira
I think how they react would be a product of who the characters actually are. I haven’t read many of the other comments so this may have already been noted, but I would try to develop the characters more. Thankfully, KP has planty of articles on that. 🙂

@seekjustice Oh my goodness, no!  You were not rude.  🙂  You were just expressing an opinion.  The reason I jumped out so quickly last night with that very short post was because my computer was acting up.  (And besides, it was very late. 😉 )

So please don’t worry about it.  I never thought you were rude at all.

@seekjustice Yes it is.

Oh, I see.  Sorry it’s not to your taste! 😉

Well, I have to go.  Goodnight!

@seekjustice Have you heard of the Christian Christmas Carol musical?  They change things up a bit so the ghosts are angels (except Marley, who’s still a ghost) and Scrooge becomes a Christian at the end, but it’s pretty similar to the book.  I’m biased, though, since I grew up on it. 😛

Haha, yeah, but didn’t they grow up in the sequel?  I do…[Read more]

@seekjustice Haha, sorry. 🙂  I haven’t read much Dickens, but I normally like lighter reads, so that’s probably part of the reason.  I grew up on the Christmas Carol musical, which was done every year at my grandmother’s church, so I do like that story, though when I read the actual version it was kind of eerie… 😛 But I still liked it.

Did y…[Read more]

@seekjustice That actually sounds like a pretty normal plot for a classic. 😛  But okay, it does sound kind of interesting.  I’ve never liked Dickens overly much, though. 🙁  I prefer Verne and Twain for classics.

Say, have you had a chance to look up the Shirley Temple Princess and the Goblins?