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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character questions in the forum Characters 1 year, 2 months ago
This is a great question! Now I have to think… and think…
Dalton: Primary=Fight. Secondary=freeze He’s a warrior, but also a squirrel. Some things never change. This does come in handy though, since most of the others have fight pretty low down on their instincts.
Viktor: Primary=Flight. Secondary=Fight. Pretty standard. He’s…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Antonio gently wiped away one of her tears with his thumb. “Please don’t cry. I like it much better when I can see your eyes sparkle naturally.”
*squeals* OH MY GOODNESS.
I loved this book! The scenes when Hallie is making up with her friends were so sweet!!!!!!!! I’m sad it’s over. I looked forward to the chapter dumps.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
DON’T YOU DARE. *hides Evan*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Aha, thank you. Fixed that.
Thank you so much for the feedback!!!!
DON’T KILL EVAN. I BEG YOU.
Oh how tantalizing this sounds…….. it would be such a sad death scene……………..
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Characters:
~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?
I thought all of them were. I guess Jonathan would be most interesting though.
~ Were there any character that need to be more engaging? If so, how would be some good ways for me to do that?
I always forget about Brian. He should…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Nice! You hyphenated firstborn though, which is one word.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m glad you had fun! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!🥳🥳🥳
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I filled out your feedback form!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yay!!! I am so glad that you had a good time!!!!! And I am so glad that you did it! That sounds like an amazing day!
Also,

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Wow!! You are getting so much better at guys and girls! I can totally tell which is the girl. This looks really good!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Lol
thanks! That one isn’t out yet, but I do have some e that are published and for sale if you would ever be interested. 🙃
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
OH MY WORD!!!!
Looking at it I suddenly realized how many of them I asked you to draw!!!! I can’t believe you pulled that off! My limit is about three people per picture and then I die. XD
THEY LOOK SO GOOD!!
Put it this way, I looked at it and new exactly who each one was, so that was brilliant! Oh man, I can’t stop laughing…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Haha!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 2 months ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I like y’all’s quotes…
I was cleaning the house a few days ago, and as usual my brain wandered down more rabbit trails than I can count. I ended up with this quote from nowhere:
She’s not childlike. She’s a phantom of her childhood, dancing on the wind by the power of lunchables and red 40.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
hmmm. What do you think of Me just removing the last paragraph completely? Would that be enough?
yes, I designed all of it.
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