Linus Smallprint

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Oh yeah, I should have made that clearer. 😅

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Oh yeah, here is part one! (If you missed it!)

A mysterious figure walked down an empty path, “Where is everyone?” He asked himself. “I came to this kingdom to find amazing writers and poets, I heard legen…[Read more]

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The unfortunate argument/misunderstanding between Ellette and I has inspired me to write part TWO of my very very very short story, to make it a very very short story instead! (And a shout out to keilah, she…[Read more]

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ATTENTION EVERYONE! I believe all of you have gone and gotten a potato! So now it is time to summon the NEXT group! 🤩🥳😁😂

(If you have not gotten a potato, you may go after this group is done 😁)

The group is!,

@whalekeeper @loopylin @theshadow and @arcticanimals

you…[Read more]

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If this book had a theme song, this would have to be it. I have listened to it several times while editing, and this just about embodies the whole story.

What do y’all think?

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The wind blew gently on the roof of the little house in the middle of the great capital city of Ardenta. On the roof, his legs crossed and a Bible on his knees, was a young man. He was reading intently, and every now and then he leant over to write dow…

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I just decided to read that chapter completely out of order. I’ve only read up to chapter 5 besides this, I think, and that was a while ago. XD I can give some feedback about this chapter, as someone who read it without any context whatsoever.

I liked the sense of friendship I got from all the good guys, even if they couldn’t…[Read more]

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Sounds good.

Whoa! Interrogate is a strong word!

lol

Okay, well i don’t like him very much. he seems weak and kinda sulky. I mean. I don’t know, he’s a coward, and I don’t like cowards. I feel a redemption arch, but at the moment it’s hard to see. So yeah, I’m hoping for redemption, but I’m not liking him right now.

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I had no idea what that picture was from. i just saw the meme the other day and thought of it. It was perfect.

Sounds like you are speaking form experience here

Let’s just say, a long time ago, the last fight I had with my brother ended when mom duct taped our wrists together.

For the whole day.

We had to do school t…[Read more]

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Ooo, that chapter was very well written. I was feeling very tense, even though I knew what was going to happen. lol.

Yeah, Tyn is in a good position. Have her do it. This will be so, so bad for Eric. Plus, Tyn is in a bad mood, so she may even scold him.

I have never met a guy that didn’t absolutely hate it when a girl scolded him.

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Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)

um…. because it was obvious since Martha got captured that he was a liability, and by the chapter you just wrote I knew he was going to get caught or alert the soldiers or something. (I may overstudy literary patterns.)

Sooo, maybe I’m blind, but I’m not seeing the problem……….. w…[Read more]

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It occurs to me that Sabina and Julian are similar. Both have a brother who became a Christian, and they both thought he had gone crazy, which made them resistant to hearing the gospel and angry at whoever shared it with their brother. So I’m wondering if Sabina is going to recall how she acted and how this may impact her i…

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Yikes, why is this getting so close to how people are irl!?

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Is the magic potato going to answer my poorly poetic question, or am I going to just have to trust it has good intentions?

Oh, normally you have to say this one saying, but he excepts the now too.

You are a!

oH NO!

These potatoes have a harder time warming up to things. They are not huge on change, and look into something…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint LOL.

@ellette-giselle

Really?! I didn’t know you wrote dystopian! What’s it about?

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness.

That is so bad.

I love it!!

@linus-smallprint

Its, its… BEAUTIFUL!!! 😭😭😭😭 I am crying TEARS of JOY!

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Joseph curled up in his bed. He could hear the murmur of voices downstairs and knew that Noah and Darrien were holding one of their secret meetings with a few young men in the church. Sabina was in the other room, tucking in Asher and Eric. He could hear her gentle voice…

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WHO SHALL BE NEXT?! (I said in a grand and fun way, not trying to be mean.)

@linus-smallprint

It’s Eric, I’m guessing.

Hmmm, can you get him captured without Alan knowing about it? That seems like the easiest way out.

Other then that, you could get him rescued easily if….. idk….. Stripe comes and knocks the guy out while Alan distracts him. Or something of that sort. Eric would still feel really stupid and useless…[Read more]