@linus-smallprint
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Thanks.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!
🤣
But it did! Really!
See, the car that hit me slowed down like it was going to stop, and then passed me and kept going. All I could think about was, “Dad is going to be so annoyed if he has to take on this hit-and-run investigation and there’s no license plate”
It…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.
i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
*enraged because I was never tagged by KP*
I will look at this as soon as I can. aka tomorrow.
Maybe.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@linus-smallprint I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@linus-smallprint Just so you know, you accidentally put chapter 33 before chapter 32, and you have chapter 30 twice.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I think we are almost two thirds in?
Okay, sounds good. If needed, you can always catch up after your break.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator
New chapters are out!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I’ve been a bit busy lately, so I’ve been paused at chapter 15 for a while. I’m still interested too, just need to start up again… as soon as i get some time.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
That worked! I’ll read through it later.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
wait…. did this hot my inbox really late….. or was I on there before it was released?! 😱
I literally just got done commenting and editing chapter 32
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
It just wrapped up, so I should have time now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
No kidding.
Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. 🙄
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
The link won’t let me on for some reason.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
Oh no, I completely forgot about that! I’m still interested; it just got lost in the last few weeks of school.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months ago
I’m so sorry, I have been swamped. I kept trying, but i just haven’t got the time right now.
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