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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow
Ok, here is the next part!
“Aaron, Aaron wake up!”
Aaron opened his eyes and blinked in the sunlight. Turin was standing by his bed. Aaron sat up in confusion. He couldn’t remember having gone to bed. “Where are we?”
“In the tavern. You fell asleep yesterday afternoon. It’s now nearly supper…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow
Ok, here is Turin. I am seriously cringing right now. Ugh. I HAVE to redo him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
I’m just basically looking for structure edits right now. This is my 4th draft, and after I go though this I’ll pass it on to my grammar/formatting editor and then move forward into getting it published. so, basically trying to make sure the story is solid, the characters are 3D, and the plot line is interesting and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint @theshadow
Anyone, (specifically Sara because this is her favorite.) Want to see a drawing of Sabina?
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Enid replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 2 years, 1 month ago
You mean you’re not going to publish it? 🥺🥺🥺
I didn’t say that. But I’m not going to say I will either, because I’m an undedicated uncontrollable teenager.
Sticky noooooootes. Those are perfect for this. I need to gimme some XD
Oh yeah, I’m familiar with Fallacy Detective.
I think the most similar a…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint ooh, more trivia!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
K y’all, here’s the next part. @linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow
As Aaron stood and spoke to the people, he knew this time something was different. He could feel the Lord working among them, and he could see in their expressions that their eyes were being opened.
By noon, several villagers had come to faith, and once it started, it…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 1 month ago
Ah, yeah, I posted it several days ago and was like, “wonder where everyone is….” then I realized I didn’t tag y’all. lol.
Haha, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Sabina…. poor girl. You can see she loves her brother dearly, and she was very frightened for him. But, she also feels betrayed. Poor thing, she’s so tangled up…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint
I just realized I haven’t tagged y’all on the last sections I posted. So, they’re up above. 😀
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint cool! They have ice cream in this universe?
(I’ve actually been thinking of doing something like this for my characters.)
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Enid replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 2 years, 2 months ago
OCD is my main drive right now for suresies XD Hope you find this a useful point of help for book 2! If you ever want opinions on story structure or anything outline, that’s exactly why I made this.
Throw up all the ideas on a wall, and get them out of your head so that you can think a little more.
Exactly, it…[Read more]
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Ruth posted a new activity comment 2 years, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint
What animal, color, object and/or character do you picture yourself as? For instance, when I was little, I pictured myself as purple…or a purple dragon depending on my mood (can you tell what my fav color is? XD) not literally, but internally.Does that make more sense?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint @highscribeofaetherium and TECHNICALLY the word “LEGO” should refer to the company. We should be calling them “LEGO bricks” if we wanna be as correct as possible.
lol I’ve always called them Legos, and I’m obsessed with correct grammar most of the time, so…..
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Ruth posted a new activity comment 2 years, 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint you too
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Could you elaborate some more, please? Do you mean do we picture ourselves as a character, an object, a colour or an animal? Or do you mean when we picture ourselves as an animal, what animal do we picture ourselves as? And, if this is the case, for character, do you mean how we picture what we might be like as a character, or what character from…[Read more]
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@rae, sorry, forgot the tag
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Um… Okay. Here we go.
Character:
This is how I imagine my Linus Smallprint Persona, the voice I narrate my books. A balance between witty and trustworthy. The type of person who wears spectacles on the end of his nose, looking overtop of them with a kind, knowledgeable smile. You can expect him to have a bit of nerdy fun, but to also…[Read more]
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Actually, nerdy is more me, witty is more Linus Smallprint
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no I’m doin some kind of wacky drawing of some kind of reality where 16 KPers are what I would imagine them being if they were animals, people or objects and stuff…makes no sense, but I promise it will be funny (maybe a little offending to some people but…I’m gonna do it anyway.)
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HighScribe replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 years, 2 months ago
Says the guy who didn’t capitalize ‘LEGO’ 😈
Hehehe…
(I didn’t make the meme though so I wasn’t the one who wrote ‘legos’)
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Enid replied to the topic Outlining Thread in the forum Plotting 2 years, 2 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @keilah-h @calyhuge @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @hybridlore @rae @esther-c @trailblazer @jonas @thearcaneaxiom @otherworldlyhistorian @folith-feolin @linus-smallprint @felicity @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @theducktator @freed_and_redeemed @kyronthearcanin @savannah_grace2009 @godlyfantasy12 (Hope you guys don’t mind the tag)
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Enid replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
…I guess nobody saw my post :- Maybe tags will help!
@loopylin @mineralizedwritings @freed_and_redeemed @keilah-h @livingwoodchronicles @esther-c @rae @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @elishavete-pidyon @theducktator @ellette-giselle @theshadow @linus-smallprint @godlyfantasy12
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TheShadow replied to the topic Wholesome Exclamations in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
“Lyen names” is good, especially if it works for your world. Random thought, this topic reminded me of a character from Tintin, he usually says “blistering barnacles!”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Wholesome Exclamations in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
I think “Lyen names” is fine. It’ like “Fay’s teeth” from what I understand.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Wholesome Exclamations in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 2 months ago
Hmm, yeah this specific topic can be hard. “Great snakes” is one exclamation I don’t think sounds like a swear word. Shakespearean words may also be a good substitute, although they might sound a little silly. “Balderdash” and “zounds” could be used too.
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Also, Ellette, don’t be too creeped out. I’m not trying to figure out your darkest secret or something I PROMISE!!!! If you wish to know what I’m up to, I suppose you do have the right. But unless you ask, I’m not tellin’ until I either fail completely or accomplish my plan!
@rae
Ummm, this is getting worse. Accomplish plan???? What plan? I don’t remember if I trust you. lol.
Ok, I’ll let it alone for now.
normal me not helping the situation at all…
@rae
I am interested in what you’re up to though!
@ellette-giselle It’s a drawing. Basically I got this idea and I’m having a Smeagol-Gollum moment telling myself to do it and not to do it, so of course I’m gonna do it until i totally fail.
@rea
Ok now you HAVE to do it, because I’m super interested.
I would picture myself as a wild white horse with a long main and tail, super slender and fast.
And then what do you mean as a character? Like make up a character that would be me, or chose one from a book or movie?
@ellette-giselle
The character doesn’t matter as much now that I have SOMETHING. You can still give one though if you wish, and it can be whoever from wherever.
Are you thinking arabian?
@rea
I might like a character better, but if you would rather do a horse that’s fine. Sure, it could be Arabian. I’m kinda mixing a few breeds in my mind when I picture such a horse.
If I were a character she would be the girl with the very long light blond hair pulled back in a braid, or perhaps falling lose. She would where an ice-blue…[Read more]