Linus Smallprint

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Thanks y’all!

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Yes and No. I haven’t been able to find my style yet, but that drawing is part of the process of finding it. I’ve been doing different styles lately, both honing my observations to paper skills and looking at many styles. I think mine will end up being similar to that one in the end though, since I’ve started to really enjoy t…[Read more]

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It’s very good, but the whole reading fantasy seemed like you started to go into it and then pulled back and skirt5ed the whole problem. I feel like if it’s going to be there at all it needs more. At the moment it feels kinda like “Why?” If you have nothing more to say on the matter, I would consider cutting it.

Also, the fact…[Read more]

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I don’t think that will be too much of a problem. Aaron has stepped into a sort of parent roll with the children. (All of the young adults have.)

but seems you are heading in the direction of Aaron and Sabina getting married and being parents to Joseph.

So it seems.

@linus-smallprint Yeah, I thought of having it maybe be something humans did to themselves, but I decided that since there’s no real magic in this universe, that would have to be through such means as, say, genetic experimentation (they combined human DNA with that of animals to better survive the planets. But that didn’t make sense to me either,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint ooh that was good!

one question: Did Jesus come to die in this universe as well, Aslan style? Or did He only die for humankind’s sin in Earth, and somehow it spread to all descendants of Adam no matter what universe?

@linus-smallprint Kinda.

So in my current WIP, which is a fanfic but I might set some original stories in the same universe, instead of the Earth as one planet, it’s a whole galaxy, and each planet roughly corresponds to a country in our world. The different species I told you about in the other forum–Drachenheul, Argonites, Changelings,…[Read more]

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Aaron might see him as a little brother, but to Joseph Aaron stepped into the place of father when Joseph’s own father died on the walls. I think it might have been more of a big brother little brother relationship if Aaron hadn’t of been right there to fill that gap when Joseph lost his father.

Noah and Darrien have more of a…[Read more]

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Noah’s trickery, which he learned when gambling, has now become a way to entertain children. I like it!

YES! That’s what I was thinking!

Ah, the little boy who knows everything and has a ‘simple’ solution to every problem. I know this character. Remind me, how old is Joseph? 10 or 11, right?

haha! I LOVE Joseph. He is so funny…[Read more]

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Awesome. Haha, I do NOT work well with deadlines. (In case you didn’t notice, I always submit my stuff crazy early. lol)

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Good grief! Y’all are cutting it close!

I set the due-date for the 21st, and it’s the 19th. Should I extend the time? So far I only have one drawing…….

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Ok, here is the next section.

One night, as Aaron sat studying his Bible in the room he shared with Noah and Darrien, a timid nock came on the door.

“Come in,” said Aaron, without looking up.

The door creaked open and quiet steps pattered across the floor and came to the small table where Aaron sat. A hand tou…

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K, I added anther as well.

One afternoon Aaron and Noah returned from doing a few odd jobs for a friend in exchange for a new pair of boots. When they came in sight of the orphanage, the door crashed open and out tumbled Joseph and several other boys. “Noah! Noah do a trick!” cried Asher.

“A trick?” asked Noah. “…

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It looks like you two are the only ones left! I wrote a short scene to fill in the gap left by time passage, and I wondered what y’all thought.

It wasn’t long before Darrien came home with a little boy and girl in tow. They were twins, about nine or ten years old.

Aaron and the rest were in the kitchen talking when D…

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Yes, Friedrich does train with a sword. I thought I described it already…. Let me go take a look.

Ok, yes, silver hilted when he’s a prince, and gold hilted with a sapphire settings when he’s a king. I wish I could send a picture of the stile.

HEY!!!!! PICTURES!!!! YAHOOOOOO!!!!

Ok, this would be what I patterned his swo…[Read more]

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“Imagining alterations” Kinda ups the creepy level in my opinion. It sounds pretty demonic and/or weird spiritual. I mean, saying “casting spells” gives us something to work off of. say “Imagining alterations” and that leaves our imagination to do the rest. I say leave it the way it is.

@linus-smallprint wow I kinda love the altered creation-evolution debate dynamic to include your magic system, that’s cool.

Also, those particular powers you mentioned that are in the books are stuff I’d be perfectly fine with if I saw it in a story. It’s actually the exact kind of thing my brother and I came up with for one of our stories.

I…[Read more]

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I’m only at Chapter 4 right now. I hope to get caught up this week.

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Hmm, I would say it isn’t the book’s fault ever. I mean, you chose what to put before your eyes, and that was your doing. The book didn’t open up, shove itself in for face, and force your brain to read the words.

This is what I mean. This is the unfortunate problem with easily sway-able people; to put the blame on C.S. Lewis…

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The narrator is a guy. He is the real Linus Smallprint. He may mention a ‘Justin’ at some point. If you ever see that, he is referring to me.

Oh my goodness, that is so funny, and creative! Whata twist! lol.