Linus Smallprint

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okay, to be fair I do listen to one video game soundtrack : god of war. Aside from that… nah.

Ok, here we go:

Lion the Witch and the Wardrobe

Prince Caspian

Ender’s Game

The Dark Night Trilogy (though I like to mix it with something else backside it can start to feel like a meal of dark chocolate)

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oh I wasn’t upset!! I was frustrated with myself because I couldn’t describe him right!

I hope I didn’t seem upset.

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Ok everyone, here is my drawing of Friedrich. Sorry about the bad lighting, it’s raining here so i don’t have natural light.

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Here you go, my two faithful readers! 😀

The next morning, Aaron met Sabina in the hall. Noah was with him, so he felt comfortable talking to her. “Sabina, can I speak to you a moment?”

“Of course,” replied Sabina. “Is everything alright?”

Aaron nodded. “Last night, Joseph came to me and asked if he could stay he…

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Never be surprised if a song I provide is from a video game. Most of the music I listen to is from video games.

That’s just sad. You need to broaden your music listening habits. You are missing out on some of the greatest composers in history! It’s…. it’s like eating PBJ for every meal. Every day!!! If you need some good…[Read more]

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Woah, wait… wow. Thank you! 😄😄

You deserve it!! Man, you are super good!

Ohh… ok. I was concerned about that…

Honestly it looks exactly like the military uniform of his kingdom, which is sho0cking because I never told you what it looks like. lol.

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You described him having ‘chin-length hair’, so I looked that up for me…

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@linus-smallprint Given that all your creatures a descendants of Adam, I realize it does make more sense for Jesus to only die and rise again in our world and it applies to them also. In Narnia, it was kinda different because most of the creatures were completely unrelated to humans. So yeah, the latter makes much more sense.

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I have no idea. I just found it.

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Thank you!! 😁

I don’t know if I’ve asked you this or not yet, but what software do you use for your drawings?

I use Clip Studio Paint.

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Okay y’all! Here I go.

Min

So one thing would be Friedrich is not left-handed, but I never specified that so that’s on me. His hair isn’t quite a wavy as I pictured, but otherwise he’s pretty spot on. I like the boots, though not quite the style I was thinking of either. Your shadin…[Read more]

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That’s because I forgot about that one.

HAHA! that makes sense. I was trying to figure out what you changed. lol.

Just for fun, if either of you has soundtrack suggestions for my book, let me know.

ooo, will do!!

@linus-smallprint ok! I don’t have a lot of fantasy soundtrack suggestions, most of my go-tos sound more modern, but if I come to a point in the story that I think a song I listened to fits with, I’ll post it!

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Ooo, I like the Charles song!!

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WAY BETTER!

Ok, the magic thing is a little fuzzy still. I read it over several times and I think I have a good idea to where you could fix the whole thing very simply but make it so the reader understands using magic to stop from shattering wasn’t right.

“As time went by, we grew to love the power we had and started to allow o…

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@linus-smallprint OOH I LOVE THAT SONG.

It’s got Spanish roots and I love that because that’s where my family came from (well, my parents are Puerto Rican and I was born in America, but still)

when we actually went to Spain earlier this year there were a couple guys playing that genre of song in an alleyway and it was so cool.

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Honestly, that was the obligation I felt writing this, so no wonder you picked that up from reading it.

lol. It felt like it.

I think your dad has some really good advice. I would go with that.

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Hmm. I didn’t want to dwell too long on it, since both the reader and Alan want to hear Charles’s story more. But I wanted to include this as well, because, like I said, a fantasy book telling you not to read fantasy books would just be weird. Perhaps I have room to fit in more here? I could also try coming back to this lat…

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 Anyway, I think he needs some pointy ears and a ridiculous amount of equipment on his back, eh?

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No.

Nope.

Not happening.

lol