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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
Okay, I have decided to continue to keep trying with this.
Hope y’all are still interested. lol.
I still plan to have a scene where Aaron talks to Sabina about courtship, but I haven’t been able to work it out yet, so for now we’re just going on.
Another month was drawing to a close, and still no change had been…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years ago
@grcr @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Thank you guys for the submissions! Can’t wait to give my feedback tomorrow! 😁😁
Don’t worry about it, it doesn’t need to be perfect, we’ll have fun seeing it either way!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years ago
of course you can ask for a character!! You’ll just have to see who all’s in line. 😉
By the way do you remember mentioning that you had a friend who tried to make an account but couldn’t end up getting on here? The same thing happened to me, and after waiting around for two months, I finally conta…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
@ellette-giselle ooh nice art!
and haha @linus-smallprint Alan and Keefe don’t look much alike, do they? lol
(gets flashbacks of imagining Oliver with a slouch hat despite the fact that you said there was to be NO HATS IN THE LYEN ARMY)
hehe glad you didn’t go full out on me
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
Most of that was just for fun to get you back for your reaction to the way I imagined Turin
*gasp* How could you!? At least I didn’t imagine Alan with a BEARD and I got his AGE right! That’s what really matters. *sniffs in sophisticated British manner*
I guessed you were joking. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
That was so scathing yet grateful that I don’t know whether to laugh or cry. lolololol.
Good grief. You are hard to please.
I was board. That’s what you get.
Maybe if I was actually trying I would do it better.
mid-late 19th-century styles
Good grief! That’s a left fielder.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
Yes…….
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TheShadow started the topic Please tear this apart in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
Hello, here is the first chapter of my WIP, and please, feel free to rip this thing apart. Critique it as much as you want, if there’s something that seems off, illogical, or is bothering you, don’t be afraid to tell me. I want this story to be the best it can, and the only way to get there is through trial and error. If I tag you, please don’t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
😈
I drew a picture of Alan because I was board. This is how I envision him in one of his good moments.

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freedom replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
@mineralizedwritings Love all the art that I’ve already seen💜💜😆 seriously tho, I love it!!! :3
@linus-smallprint I still trace things oftentimes too. That looks cool though!!
@ellette-giselle AHH i love it🤩🤩 dude def sounds like he’s gonna have a rough time tho💀
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Mini Adventure Ideas? in the forum Plotting 2 years ago
I was actually planning to have Howard get captured and taken to the zoo in a later chapter, lol.
The only definition of DMV I found was Department of Motor Vehicles, so hopefully that’s right. Linda wants a Ferrari.
Ooh, a fair! She would get her beak stuck in a caramel apple. XD
Lol I love t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
well you can’t blame a girl for not being attracted to a weak guy. Lol. I mean, right now he seems a little bit like a wilting violet. I’ll give him a chance, but so far not my type.
Umm… I pretty sure if you look it up it’s pretty common for dissertation to be punished by getting shot.
it may just be in war tho.
I haven’t…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
Little late here, but @mineralizedwritings @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint great art from all three of you 🙃 Everyone keeps improving so quickly.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
thank you for telling me about Alcatraz. That makes sense.
I read your chapter. I like it a lot, though Eric is not my kinda guy. 😂
sooo, btw, I’m not sure how affiliated you are with military, but you do know what will happen if Alan becomes a deserter, right? He’ll be killed if they catch him.
It’s pretty unive…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
I thought it was you who mentioned it.
I don’t know if you saw my question, so I’ll just ask it again. 😀
I was wondering if Alcatraz ever has some sort of redemption. I mean, I don’t want him to become a perfect character because he does good deeds, but he also kinda isn’t the best right now. I believe you and I ten…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Discernment in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years ago
(and just so you know, your fun little comedic WIP is amazing and still has wonderful characters and amazing lessons and values within it even though it’s ‘just for fun’ 😉🥰)
Thank you, I hope to give it some meaning :]
I’m sorry for being kind of sarcastic, I was very moody at the time of writing that post.…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic Discernment in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 years ago
I think your right about the anxiety being dangerous, and thank you! I will tag you when I post the first chapter soon.
I will, thank you!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
@linus-smallprint very nice! I trace stuff all the time too, so I know how you feel saying stuff like “This technically isn’t my art, I just traced it and added my personal flair”
(My profile picture is a prime example)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years ago
Why does it keep messing up your guy’s tags? Ugh, let me try again.
@rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Deadline for the art challenge is Friday the 6th
Thanks for participating : )
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years ago
@rae  @linus-smallprint  @grcr  @keilah-h  @ellette-giselle
Deadline is Friday the 6th
Thanks for participating : )
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