Linus Smallprint

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Joseph returned to the Caddicks and committed himself to the work the Lord had called him to. Mr. Caddick, David, and Stephen were eager to dive into the training Noah and Darrien gave to the other young men seeking to lead in the church. Not…

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No, not the same Andrew. (How did you remember him? I even forgot that was the other guy’s name. lol.) Should I change the name in the first book? That Andrew was an older teen, while this Andrew is like nine or ten.

Sometimes it is easy to forget what a blessing it is to have easy access to Bibles for everyone. I own 3 and can…

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Joseph and Noah were exhausted and slept until evening. It was Joseph who woke first. Getting up, he roused Noah, who was sleeping lightly. The two tidied the room and Joseph started downstairs. When he reached the bottom, one of the little…

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Deadline is today!

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At least I’m not the only one with this problem. I like Mr. Caddick a lot, though I’m not sure how much screentime he’ll actually get……

I am very heavily leaning towards it.

Let’s just say there will be problems if you don’t…..

Like a tone of readers furious because everyone can see from the moment they met that…[Read more]

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Brother Andrew moment.

ikr? I couldn’t help it. I love stories like that!

I like how it’s a family. Ti somehow gives them and their home a cozy feeling, and I felt right at home with them.

Good! I’m glad. I really enjoy the feel they give.

It will be nice to have some characters as well. All of the Christians we have been f…

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Happy happy day! It’s super long!!!

 

Joseph sat on his bed and carefully opened the journal, his fingers trembling with the wave of emotions that filled him. Memories of Aaron flooded his mind, and for a moment he was too blinded by tears to…

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Oh my. How did auto correct not get that? How did I even type that? lol. Haha. I made up a new word.

 

Now the question is, how well is Joseph going to remember this conversation?

That would indeed be the question.

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The next morning when Joseph woke, he lay in bed a moment, trying to remember what had happened the day before. All at once it came back to him and he scrambled to his feet. Yanking on his vest he hurried into the hall and knocked on Asher and E…

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Thanks so much for the feedback! I’m feeling pretty confidant with this new switch, so you can delete the old version. lol.

What’s with suddenly swapping the governor in this new version?

well, a few reasons.

1. Flows better with the idea that they just opened the gates after 7 years.

2. Why else would Asher and Eric have s…[Read more]

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Thanks you guys! 🙂

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ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!

Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]

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Hmm. I guess I was trying to cross over the LTBL goal into this without clearly stating that. It’s hard, because Joseph has a tendency to lean toward a survival mindset (no one can really blame him) and the story is his POV.

UGH, I can see the Eric thing both ways. I could still use his almost death as a “wakeup call” and it…[Read more]

@theducktator

Not yet, I should though.

@keilah-h

That’s a good response, I feel like that’s hard to do sometimes though when human minds constantly want answers.

@raxforge

This definitely did help, thanks.

@linus-smallprint

Thanks, those are interesting points.

@power

You’re right, the devil is kind of overrated when compared to God’s…[Read more]

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@hybridlore wants me to save Eric.

What are your thoughts?

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Yes!!! Stripe got hugged!!!! I’m glad the crow showed up again. I’d almost forgotten about them.

It’s destination was the capital, Pryde.

That should be Its, without the apostrophe.

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I sure don’t enjoy it.

Do you think it’s fine as long as this is the last one……. (for a while.)

@linus-smallprint

Kind of. I did get a little hope, but when the mood switched I thought, “Okay. Here we go again. Do we have to be here for this?”

Oh.

I thought you said to go ahead and kill them.

Do you think it wasn’t good?

@linus-smallprint

i think so. He’s in the barn talking to martha