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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh, do you feel like I missed anything important that you would have wanted drawn?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Ugh.
I do not like full body illustrations. They are so difficult! Legs are awful! At least I can normally hide them on girls because of skirts and dresses. But Guys….. ugh. So hard to do.
Glad you like the horse. I love playing with angles. Oh yes, the one of the prince is one of my favorites. Along with Aaron and his sword…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@keilah-h @linus-smallprint @hybridlore @koshka @elishavet-pidyon
Once y’all have a chance to look and comment, I’m going to delete these.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Guess what I just discovered…… I can delete forums! So I could delete this whole thing and remove TVON off of here once I have all the feedback I want/need.
Pretty awesome!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Tough choice. Hmm… what about… both!
Haha! Sounds like a good plan.
I’ll start with LTBL.
Be as horrible as you can and rip into them. This is the point when I can change them if I need to, (or scrap them altogether) 😉
(Say nice things too. XD XD)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh, do you want to see the ones from LTBL or TVON?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Awesome!
Let me grab a few of those illustrations.
I can also scan the new ones in right now.
(I’m watermarking them just because I’m paranoid. Sorry)
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Andrew replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
People sometimes let dogs at the dinner table.
Yeah, and those people are… interesting.
….and people who’ve been stranded with their sled dogs have sometimes eaten them.
Yay, morbid topics… (sarcasm)
It applies to musicians as well.
True
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I had to run and do something before I could read the feedback. (oh the pain!)But I just finished it!! Thank you so much for all the time and work you put into this! These are some really great suggestions and even if some of them make me sigh and go, “oh dear, really?” they make sense and it’s just me cringing at the idea of…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
*dances around the room cheering!*
*Races back to laptop to read feedback*
YAY!!! SO EXCITING!!! I’m opening it right now!!!
(It feels like Christmas!!!!) lol
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint He looks great! What kinda creature is he? I see he’s kinda like a kentor, but more elk-ish and less man.
The way you did his legs is very cool–digitigrade/unguligrade bipeds are hard (you can ask me, I have four species of d-grades) , but you pulled it off really nicely. I also like how you annotated the fact that his hands…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
I’m left-handed, so I have to do it backwards if I want to avoid smudging my work.
I use gloves. My dad has some thick plastic ones he uses when dealing with drug evidence. (He’s a Detective.) and he let’s me have a pair. They work well. I think you can find gloves like that for working on cars or maybe even cleaning. T…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@linus-smallprint   @stephie
I did it to Adrian and no one thought that was too soon.
It happens in real life and I think it works well.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
*nods slowly*
Ah, yes. Thou hast achieved a good argument for keeping it the way it is.
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
Definitely has a cool feeling. I like the things coming out of his back–I want to say they look like antlers. He also seems to have dimension. (I mean his character. I know nothing about art XD) He doesn’t look completely sinister, but there’s something about him that doesn’t sit quite right. You know what I mean?
I like it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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