Linus Smallprint

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Oh, do you want to see the ones from LTBL or TVON?

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Awesome!

Let me grab a few of those illustrations.

I can also scan the new ones in right now.

(I’m watermarking them just because I’m paranoid. Sorry)

@keilah-h

People sometimes let dogs at the dinner table.

Yeah, and those people are… interesting.

….and people who’ve been stranded with their sled dogs have sometimes eaten them.

Yay, morbid topics… (sarcasm)

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It applies to musicians as well.

True

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I had to run and do something before I could read the feedback. (oh the pain!)But I just finished it!! Thank you so much for all the time and work you put into this! These are some really great suggestions and even if some of them make me sigh and go, “oh dear, really?” they make sense and it’s just me cringing at the idea of…[Read more]

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*dances around the room cheering!*

*Races back to laptop to read feedback*

YAY!!! SO EXCITING!!! I’m opening it right now!!!

(It feels like Christmas!!!!) lol

@linus-smallprint He looks great! What kinda creature is he? I see he’s kinda like a kentor, but more elk-ish and less man.

The way you did his legs is very cool–digitigrade/unguligrade bipeds are hard (you can ask me, I have four species of d-grades) , but you pulled it off really nicely. I also like how you annotated the fact that his hands…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint Perfect!

That could be cool.

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I’m left-handed, so I have to do it backwards if I want to avoid smudging my work.

I use gloves. My dad has some thick plastic ones he uses when dealing with drug evidence. (He’s a Detective.) and he let’s me have a pair. They work well. I think you can find gloves like that for working on cars or maybe even cleaning. T…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint    @stephie

I did it to Adrian and no one thought that was too soon.

It happens in real life and I think it works well.

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whoa!! He looks really cool! I like the feel!

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*nods slowly*

Ah, yes. Thou hast achieved a good argument for keeping it the way it is.

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Wait, you’re left handed?

*holds out left hand for a handshake*

So am I!

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Definitely has a cool feeling. I like the things coming out of his back–I want to say they look like antlers. He also seems to have dimension. (I mean his character. I know nothing about art XD) He doesn’t look completely sinister, but there’s something about him that doesn’t sit quite right. You know what I mean?

I like it.

@ellette-giselle @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @kyronthearcanin @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @esther-c @theducktator @grcr @jonas @linus-smallprint @anyone-else-interested!

Here’s the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ahoeOca8TIKYb8F9O6bWWR6q9aeZ_sHNy6Y8Uk1VbH4/edit?usp=sharing

@linus-smallprint   @stephie

I think that Alan needed more time to grow in his faith. I know that as a “baby believer” I would not be strong enough to accept what Alan accepted. And I might not realise that Christ can be my strength. So…I loved the ending but maybe not so soon? On the other hand, it goes to show how powerful it can be when some…

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Ah, Malan sounds better XD

I assume you mean characters like Thom it the recruitment officer at the beginning?

Yeah, minor characters he converses with. Although sometimes you pull it off quite well, other times it’s not so good.

Hmm. I might include some more in the final version. I’ll see what people think when I share book I…

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*plays how to train your dragon theme song*

:]

By the way, did you read what I decided to do with my magic system? You were the one who was encouraging me to keep it the way it was the most. While I have made my choice and am going to stick with it, I am curious to see what you think.

I wanted to support that version of your…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint Well, technically, I wasn’t really shipping them that hard, but I did notice that they could be a couple and assumed it was intentional.

Honestly, it’s actually better this way, that you didn’t plan to have romance. That meant it came up naturally due to your character’s’ personalities and isn’t shoehorned into the plot. Y…[Read more]

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OH OH OH I have an idea. Martha is always described as super timid, but she should have a dragon for a steed by the end of the series. That was her first fun interaction with Alan, talking about dragons.

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And then with all you girls starting to root for them, I really considered letting it happen.

XD Count me neutral. I didn’t notice this potential ship on the first read-through, and I still feel like it’s not on my radar despite finding the quotes. This may be because I’m not big into romance, like you. (You can do whatever you w…[Read more]