@linus-smallprint
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
….I had no idea about safety concerns and google…I’ll have to look into that
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@linus-smallprint
Yes. For some reason KP is glitching, so I actually can’t see what I’m typing. I’m just shooting blind and hoping I spell and type everything. It’s like typing while blind. This is kind of odd/cool/frustrating.
I was going to say, I didn’t know that proton did that with docs. -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@linus-smallprint
WOW! I didn’t know p -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
Hey, here’s an idea. I have come across some lessons to help improve characters. There are five of them. What if we went through them together, both taking one or two characters that readers felt were flat (that would be Charles and Thom for me) and see what comes out of it? We could invite others to join as well. If we don’t lik…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 6 days ago
@linus-smallprint haha thanks then!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
Oh you’re not the one. It was more like you voiced what was already bothering me. I’m sorry if I made it seem like it was somehow your fault. 😌
Maybe God will use this book will encourage Christians to venture into dangerous places to share the gospel!
I’d like that. But even more, I wanted it to wake people up to the fact…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint If all else fails, remember that your guys’ stories, no matter what they are, will make so much more impact in the world than mine.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
Oh It’s not just @linus-smallprint. He just said a few things that have already been bothering me in the back of my mind. It’s this aggravating struggle to rewrite something and pull it out of the ditch of not-so-great writing and up to the level I have worked to achieve now.
It’s always been a story that’s been close to my heart,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
I know. *sobs*
Okay, sounds good. Maybe next week?
*sighs* some of this feedback is depressing. I wonder……. these books were written so long ago and comparing them to the stuff I have written now, they’re just not as good at all. Are they even worth trying to rewrite? Rewriting is so hard….. is the message and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks ago
Yay!!!!
aw, thanks for making me laugh. Smaug the laptop ate two years of historical research and I’m so not happy.
I’ll look at this right away!
btw, do you still need me to wait until April now that you sent this?
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I’m assuming you added Sara because writing one female in the group is awkward?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@linus-smallprint thank you! I don’t draw mecha dragons much, but when I do I like to put detail into them.
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whaley replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 2 days ago
I don’t know. XD Maybe because I’m KP’s friendly neighborhood psychic.
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Potato reporter replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 2 days ago
ha, it is!
well… were not so different, you and I… XD
also, I guess I lost the game…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 weeks, 2 days ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
*visible confusion*
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Stepheroni and Cheese replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
*squints at post*
*clicks on link*
Well, according to wikipedia, whether I lost is up to interpretation.
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