Linus Smallprint

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Here you go: https://drive.proton.me/urls/7FTVZ5ZDVR#qZ3ixOGvq1e0

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For some reason your notifs didn’t work the first time. This looks interesting! Is there a way to comment on it?

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Oh, yes, I did see this. Prolly should’ve said something, sorry about that. I started reading it this morning actually—I’m at chapter seven. What kind of feedback is your sister looking for?

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Oooo! Awesome!

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Woah! That is so cool!

Now I just have to figure out how to do it………

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….I had no idea about safety concerns and google…I’ll have to look into that

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Yes. For some reason KP is glitching, so I actually can’t see what I’m typing. I’m just shooting blind and hoping I spell and type everything. It’s like typing while blind. This is kind of odd/cool/frustrating.
I was going to say, I didn’t know that proton did that with docs.

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WOW! I didn’t know p

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okay, that sounds good.

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Hey, here’s an idea. I have come across some lessons to help improve characters. There are five of them. What if we went through them together, both taking one or two characters that readers felt were flat (that would be Charles and Thom for me) and see what comes out of it? We could invite others to join as well. If we don’t lik…

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@linus-smallprint haha thanks then!

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Oh you’re not the one. It was more like you voiced what was already bothering me. I’m sorry if I made it seem like it was somehow your fault. 😌

Maybe God will use this book will encourage Christians to venture into dangerous places to share the gospel!

I’d like that. But even more, I wanted it to wake people up to the fact…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint If all else fails, remember that your guys’ stories, no matter what they are, will make so much more impact in the world than mine.

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Oh It’s not just @linus-smallprint. He just said a few things that have already been bothering me in the back of my mind. It’s this aggravating struggle to rewrite something and pull it out of the ditch of not-so-great writing and up to the level I have worked to achieve now.

It’s always been a story that’s been close to my heart,…[Read more]

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I know. *sobs*

Okay, sounds good. Maybe next week?

*sighs* some of this feedback is depressing. I wonder……. these books were written so long ago and comparing them to the stuff I have written now, they’re just not as good at all. Are they even worth trying to rewrite? Rewriting is so hard….. is the message and…[Read more]

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Yay!!!!

aw, thanks for making me laugh. Smaug the laptop ate two years of historical research and I’m so not happy.

I’ll look at this right away!

btw, do you still need me to wait until April now that you sent this?

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I’m assuming you added Sara because writing one female in the group is awkward?

@linus-smallprint thank you! I don’t draw mecha dragons much, but when I do I like to put detail into them.

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I don’t know. XD Maybe because I’m KP’s friendly neighborhood psychic.

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Yippy!!!

*Considers playing The Game on brothers*

Nah, way too risky.