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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
@linus-smallprint I love how it went to first person! I don’t know why. Maybe it’s cause I write in first person in my current WIP and haven’t seen anyone else use it in a while.
Wow! okay! Cyrus has given Alan a cruel ultimatum. I have no idea what Alan will do in this situation. I mean, Charles has already pointed out he’s not afraid to die,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
I saw that coming and really didn’t want to.
oh why are you so mean! Why are you such a terrible person. *sobbing* (like I have room to talk)
Oh man. He shouldn’t do it, of course! But man, this one is gonna hurt.
One thought.
I know if you choose to punish me instead, I will deserve whatever it is you do.”
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
I saw that coming and really didn’t want to.
oh why are you so mean! Why are you such a terrible person. *sobbing* (like I have room to talk)
Oh man. He shouldn’t do it, of course! But man, this one is gonna hurt.
One thought.
I know if you choose to punish me instead, I will deserve whatever it is you do.”
He j…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
HAY!
Was that supposed to be a prank…………
This should be chapter 22…… (Chapter 30th being The Prison and Chapter 31st The Regretful,) but there is no Chapter 22nd!
Where did it go?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
If you’re asking what do I think he should do right now (before I read the chapter), then i don’t know. There’s not much he can do, besides not cooperate.
Oh yay! We’ve hit the chapter that has the book name, This’ll be good.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
Oh boy, get ready Y’all.
NEXT SECTION
Three days passed. The girl was soon up and well, with only a slight cough and sore throat to remind her of the cold. The rest of the alley children were starting to relax in their new home. Their eyes lost the ha…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
I’m done with my 650 words!
Maybe I’ll post them later.
But now it is time for REVENGE 😈
@jonas 💨⚪4x
@theducktator 💨⚪4x
@linus-smallprint 💨⚪4x
@grcr 💨⚪2x
@rae 💨⚪2x
@savannah_grace2009 💨⚪2x
@raxforge 💨⚪2x
@esther-c💨⚪2x
*laughs in…
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
TNPT! I need to see if Charles will survive.🥺*hands him tea with honey*
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Andrew replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months ago
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
I got an email about something called Crazy Writing Week. It looks fun. Does anyone here know what that is?
@whalekeeper @highscribeofaetherium @savannah_grace2009 @rae @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @esther-c
@hybridlore @grcr @help-I’m-out-of-tags
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The Most Esteemed Feathered One replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
And Charles survives another chapter! Yay!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Well don’t make your readers mad, and then they’ll get your aesthetic boards right. lol
Yeah, that’s better! Now I can see a picture that was blocked before. The man with his arms in the air. I think that cries redemption louder than the red text.
Good. Okay.
I didn’t realize how dark the text made it until I took it o…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
hmmmmm.
I’ll have to look through Sabina’s letters and see if I mentioned his age.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Wow, thanks! Even got the purple eyes. Is that a crow on a horse in there? Did you put the hand in there for the his wizard scars?
You’re welcome!
Yes, that is a crow on the horse.
Yes, that is for the scars.
It feels a little too dark for Alan. It needs his bright and heroic side. I don’t see much of a desire to go on or b…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
I see Eric’s taken up a new hobby, teasing everyone for any signs of love. He better watch his back if he gets a girlfriend.
Lol. No kidding.
Joseph seems to have overcome his shame over being afraid? Unless he was just distracted in that moment. But I feel if this had happened earlier, he would be calling himself a coward a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 2 months ago
haha.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
I felt creative so I made this for you.
I hope you like it.
It’s probably not perfect, but then again, an aesthetic is only supposed to remind you of the character, so maybe it’ll be fine.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
The next morning, the adults were up bright and early, surprisingly before the children. “Amelia, why don’t you join us girls in the kitchen,” Sabina said when Amelia and Joseph appeared. “We can work on the big breakfast for the children.”
“Oh…
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