@linus-smallprint
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Yay!!!
Thank so much for all the help you have given. I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it!! I shall take a look now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Lolololol. I’ve gotten to the point where spellcheck knows my shortcuts and auto-corrects for me. It only messes up sometimes. But still….. mine can be a bit of a mess once I’m though, and I always run edits before posting.
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Enid replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint thanks!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay! Most people seem to be reacting positively to this, so I will definitely conciser coming back
Yes please.
Interesting. Did you find it confusing at all when it switched to reveal that Cedrick was narrating everything?
Uh… not really sure. At the moment I was just in speed-read mode, not really edit mode. I was…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!
🤣
But it did! Really!
See, the car that hit me slowed down like it was going to stop, and then passed me and kept going. All I could think about was, “Dad is going to be so annoyed if he has to take on this hit-and-run investigation and there’s no license plate”
It…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.
i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
*enraged because I was never tagged by KP*
I will look at this as soon as I can. aka tomorrow.
Maybe.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@linus-smallprint Just so you know, you accidentally put chapter 33 before chapter 32, and you have chapter 30 twice.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I think we are almost two thirds in?
Okay, sounds good. If needed, you can always catch up after your break.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator
New chapters are out!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’ve been a bit busy lately, so I’ve been paused at chapter 15 for a while. I’m still interested too, just need to start up again… as soon as i get some time.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
That worked! I’ll read through it later.
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