@linus-smallprint
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Thanks.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Of course you would come out of an accident and say this!
🤣
But it did! Really!
See, the car that hit me slowed down like it was going to stop, and then passed me and kept going. All I could think about was, “Dad is going to be so annoyed if he has to take on this hit-and-run investigation and there’s no license plate”
It…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Hey! Scythe! My dad and brothers LOVE that game. Funny thing is, I can’t stand it, but I’m the one that got them into it by buying it for them. 😂 Weirdly enough, I was picturing this kingdom like the scythe art, so that’s super funny.
i really, really like this!!! The narrative and flow and style is 100% a step above…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Sorry. Didn’t see this until now.
I’m fine, and they’re fine. Was pretty shaken up, but also weirdly cool. It was a very interesting experience all around.
Gave me some insight into writing adrenaline charged characters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Last of The Righteous in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
*enraged because I was never tagged by KP*
I will look at this as soon as I can. aka tomorrow.
Maybe.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint I haven’t, sorry. She’s kept writing it thoguh, right? I might go back and catch up.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@linus-smallprint Just so you know, you accidentally put chapter 33 before chapter 32, and you have chapter 30 twice.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I think we are almost two thirds in?
Okay, sounds good. If needed, you can always catch up after your break.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator
New chapters are out!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I’ve been a bit busy lately, so I’ve been paused at chapter 15 for a while. I’m still interested too, just need to start up again… as soon as i get some time.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
That worked! I’ll read through it later.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
wait…. did this hot my inbox really late….. or was I on there before it was released?! 😱
I literally just got done commenting and editing chapter 32
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
It just wrapped up, so I should have time now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
No kidding.
Plus someone crashed me yesterday going into town. Add that to the list. 🙄
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
The link won’t let me on for some reason.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Oh no, I completely forgot about that! I’m still interested; it just got lost in the last few weeks of school.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic An Adventure Story in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m so sorry, I have been swamped. I kept trying, but i just haven’t got the time right now.
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