Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

I am very much behind, but reading the rest of it all at once will give me an idea of your pacing, too. Will get to it soon and will give feedback!

The question you accused of being AI generated may be the only one on there that is not.

Bruuuhhh

@linus-smallprint

Dude. Ai has been asking me these questions!

*stares in horror*

😂

Of course let me know. I’d love to help with the third book! Just let me know. Maybe while you’re on your online break you can draw a bunch of illustrations! *hint hint* 🙃

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The Narrow Path Trilogy Book 2
 
Character:
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Martha. I just really liked her and could relate as an older sister. Some of her struggles felt similar to my own.

Eric was really interesting and fun. I also really liked James.

Alan…[Read more]

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You gotta set it up like one of those quizzes someday. You know, the one people always use for scheduling group events that I can never figure out how to make.

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ALAN BECKER DOODLES YES I AM NOT ALONE

@linus-smallprint @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @whalekeeper

Four new chapters today! 😳

Don’t feel like you have to read them all right away if you don’t have time. This is the end of Part 2.

@linus-smallprint I see you’re an Alan Becker fan!! My brother loves watching those. They’re so cool.

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

I’ve tried using that designer too. Never got to the same level of detail as Keilah’s characters here. 🙂

@linus-smallprint thanks!

Just worked on some lore for that very character, too. It’s funny how fast he’s developed since I just finalized what his name and backstory would be.

I was gonna lore dump but decided this isn’t the place for that.

@linus-smallprint thanks! Had a lot of fun messing around with the options to get something that matched my drawings of the character.

I actually used the site to finalize the design of another character, her son and the protagonist of one of the sequels of her story. I’ve had ideas for him in my mind for a while, but never really had a s…[Read more]

does this count as art? probably not

but @linus-smallprint introduced me to a character creator thing, and I made Huntress on it.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h

It’s Tuesday again! Two new chapters on whichever document you prefer.

@ellette-giselle @theducktator @linus-smallprint @whalekeeper @keilah-h

Two new chapters!

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much for this! It was really helpful!

btw, Tintin is THE BEST. 😁

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!!

Thank so much for all the help you have given. I’m glad you’ve enjoyed it!! I shall take a look now.

@linus-smallprint

Lolololol. I’ve gotten to the point where spellcheck knows my shortcuts and auto-corrects for me. It only messes up sometimes. But still….. mine can be a bit of a mess once I’m though, and I always run edits before posting.

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I like it! Isaiah and Cedrick are more interesting together than apart. Isaiah’s “code” doesn’t bother me. I mean, it would bother me in real life. But it’s fun when a character has a specific part of their personality that takes action easily. In this case, it’s bitterness. Isaiah could easily become part of a political plot…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint thanks!

@linus-smallprint

Okay! Most people seem to be reacting positively to this, so I will definitely conciser coming back

Yes please.

Interesting. Did you find it confusing at all when it switched to reveal that Cedrick was narrating everything?

Uh… not really sure. At the moment I was just in speed-read mode, not really edit mode. I was…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint ok! I’ll go read it!