@linus-smallprint
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 14 hours, 41 minutes ago
Two days agon, it was ten degrees celsius and the snow was almost gone, and now we have possibly the biggest dump of snow this winter.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 14 hours, 42 minutes ago
In Canada, we have 6 seasons.
- Winter
- More Winter
- Still Winter
- Even More Winter
- You Better Believe it is Still Winter (Current)
- Construction
Outside my house today:
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 13 hours ago
Nice! I like it!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 13 hours ago
Thank you! Code Pen is a nice website to play around with code.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 13 hours ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapter 8 out now!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 13 hours ago
What’s that suposed to mean?!
Do I need to fix it or what?!?
Nothing you need to fix. Just the protagonist makes a choice at the end of Dune that saves lives, but isn’t good, and the girl he like goes something like ‘okay, whatever’, but in the movie, she is upset and doesn’t go along with it.
I’ll get to answering your qu…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 16 hours ago
Sure, he can try. He’s been trying for the last few minutes. It’s not going to do much good. He’s a sixteen-year-old kid against several temple guards.
They’re going to win.
Common sence. Got it.
btw, why Nick? Everyone does “Bob” or “Bill” around here when they don’t know the name.
Short for Nicodemus. That’s all I will explain…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint posted a new activity comment 2 days, 16 hours ago
👍 I will see if I can find a different way to share my story that will be more suitable.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 17 hours ago
Okay, sounds fine, but you might want to check out Ellette’s profile first. She just put some warning there about using Google.
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Linus Smallprint posted a new activity comment 2 days, 17 hours ago
Okay, thank you for letting us know.
I’ve noticed that you haven’t commented on either my story or hybridlore’s. Is this the reason why? Would you like us to switch to a different file-sharing option?-
I have been buried under a pile of work, so no, that’s not why. I’m actually moving right now to take a look at them. However, come the end of next month I will have canceled my google account and will no longer be able to access either of your stories.
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👍 I will see if I can find a different way to share my story that will be more suitable.
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Thanks.
You have a month, so no rush.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 17 hours ago
The high priest stepped forward so that he was inches from Dietrich. “We will take you from the palace— there is no need to draw unwanted attention. Once we have reached the temple, I will put to death your traitorous servant.”
Diedrich felt a chill run down his spine, and he darted a glance at Marius. His friend had strai…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 17 hours ago
Leon was dragged from the warm comfort of sleep by something sharp pricking his leg. He readjusted, shaking his leg, but something pinched him. “Ow!” he exclaimed, bending over to inspect the pricking.
At that moment, something whistled overhead and struck the chair. Leon hit the floor and rolled to a crouch, the annoying pai…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 15 hours ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h
Chapters 5 and 6 are out!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 15 hours ago
Your welcome!
I really appreciate you going out of your way to try to help me understand.
Confession, I asked ChatGPT to code most of it, and then modified it from there.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy – Book II: The Sword in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 15 hours ago
@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle
Okay, I think you all have me convinced now. I will rethink Tyn’s behaviour in the opening later and will try to treat her fairer appearances later in the series.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 15 hours ago
Dude. You are so mean. 😝
😏
Yes, but Wilhelm is the traditional spelling. 😁 (you still say it Vwilhelm)
Ah. That makes sense.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 15 hours ago
I know you are curious, so here was my thought process while reading this:
With him was a young man who appeared to be in his mid to late teens.
Another teenage boy? How many does she have and why is she introducing another one? Or is she? Because if this is the prince in disguise then she couldn’t just go change his…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 4 days, 16 hours ago
@theducktator @ellette-giselle @stephie
Autocorrect in 1st draft be like:
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Except maybe the slave part. It dosen’t feel odd that all the slaves are men, even if there could be, and have been female slaves.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
This is a big step for me! I used to only write people my own age or eighteen. Eighteen was the magic year that was always perfect to write. 😂
I know. I like to write characters that are that age as well. Alan, Martha, Eric, James, and Tyn are all not too far from that (Oliver’s a few years older).
Just in the setting you have,…[Read more]
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Thanks.
You have a month, so no rush.