Linus Smallprint

@whalekeeper

well, since I haven’t seen or heard head or tale of the wing bullies I’m gonna have to take what I can get! I want some fists flying or something!

as for Loopy, I’d love to have an interaction! How do I start that? Just ask her?

@calyhuge

I know Freedom used to be Anonymous. I don’t know about that other name tho. 🤷‍♀️

Oooo, so you’re the one controlling the bullies!! I can’t wait to meet up! Anyone who messes with Rory will be sorry. A) because he’s a trained soldier. B) he’s like one of my favorite characters ever!
you have my permission to beat him up tho. You just…[Read more]

@keilah-h

wonderful!! Any thoughts?

@keilah-h

Rory

Rory tucked away the info about the winged kids for later. He glanced at Hunter. The kid was young, but Rory guessed he could become an ally if a fight broke out. Rory shook his head. Thee I go again! Will I ever be able to view the world through the eyes of a teen instead of a soldier in a war zone?

Hunter offered to show him…[Read more]

@Grcr

congrats!! How many wins is this?!?!
it was well earned.

@keilah-h

it was my own design. This are the characters from the movie. I have seen a few similar posters. I’m glad you like it!!

@linus-smallprint

im so glad you’re still interested and willing to help me! Once I’m finished with it on here I’ll be passing it on to my editor. So this is SUPER helpful.

hmmm, I think I did foreshadow but maybe not clearly enough. Thats easy to fix.

Aaron has grown!! I’m glad you’re picking up on it! I was worried it was too subtle, b…[Read more]

@esther-c

Hmm, this looks intresting.

Okay, I can fix the mom problem and giving up Audrey in one swing.

Audrey’s mom was killed by the bad-guys.

Now her dad is super freaked out that Audrey will be hurt as well, so he gives her up.

(Now, I don’t think giving up the Child God gave to you is ever a good option, but if that’s how your…[Read more]

@esther-c

Right-o!

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

Okay, I have decided to continue to keep trying with this.

Hope y’all are still interested. lol.

I still plan to have a scene where Aaron talks to Sabina about courtship, but I haven’t been able to work it out yet, so for now we’re just going on.

Another month was drawing to a close, and still no change had been…

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Phantom of the Opera anyone?

@keilah-h

Rory

Hmm, this could be interesting. 

Rory looked over at Hunter. “So, the winged kids are nice… except then some of them are really mean. That isn’t confusing. Not only do you tell me I need to keep an eye out for winged students, but I have to be able to tell them apart?” He chuckled. “This place s certainly out of my league. So,…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Alright then! I’ll help in as many ways as I can!! Here are the ones I caught in this section.

Oh, btw, Rae’s right. You haven’t posted in WAY to long! We’re all starving for Riker/Leon scenes!

Okay, so there’s no way to highlight on KP that I’ve found, so I’m making my edits bold. I’m afraid you’ll have to look kinda…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I think I’m the only one in line. And I don’t have a drawing of mine either.

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVED  it this was so so good freedom!!!

I caught quite a few grammatical errors and typos but I’m guessing you’re not done editing. If you want me to go back and mark them I can.

other then that, amazing job!! I CANNOT WAIT for the next book!!

@mineralizedwritings

k, I finished up mine.

@freed_and_redeemed

of course you can ask for a character!! You’ll just have to see who all’s in line. 😉

@linus-smallprint

By the way do you remember mentioning that you had a friend who tried to make an account but couldn’t end up getting on here? The same thing happened to me, and after waiting around for two months, I finally conta…[Read more]