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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Thanks so much for the feedback! I’m feeling pretty confidant with this new switch, so you can delete the old version. lol.
What’s with suddenly swapping the governor in this new version?
well, a few reasons.
1. Flows better with the idea that they just opened the gates after 7 years.
2. Why else would Asher and Eric have s…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Thanks you guys! 🙂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
The humor in that chapter is so good. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Good, good. I’m glad this is better.
Yesterday we reached Acts 12 in a sermon series at our church, and I almost started laughing because it was pretty perfect. So yeah, that’s where I got my inspiration.
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Makes sense. I guess it would be a little awkward if that wasn’t the case 😅
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
The ship.
The way you interact with one another would be very awkward if you weren’t.
Just saying.
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I was kind of shipping you guys in my head already
You’re not the first, lol
It was pretty obvious. lol.
Do you mean the ship or something else? And if you mean the ship, I don’t know if I should take offence of that or not, lol, jk
Also, if anyone thinks that I am adorable because I am small and chubby, they are…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Asher would not appreciate you bringing that up again. lol.
No, not much to rewrite. Just a little.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Okay, I see what you mean. Eric was just teasing when he was being formal.
I’m envisioning a much larger cut. As I said, a “gash”And actually, depending on where the cut is, you can bleed out.Maybe not from something like that, though. That might be overdoing it. This is my first draft of this section. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
So, now that I’m going with this version, do you have any overall thoughts about the section?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
No, you can’t just say that. Give me a literary reason why I should do this rather then the other one. Why is this better?
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HighScribe changed their profile picture 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@hybridlore  @linus-smallprint   @koshka  @keilah-h   @elishavet-pidyon  @grcr
ALTERNATE NEXT SECTION!!!!!
Please be honest as y’all read this, because saving the boys is going to be a HUGE change. However, I think it may be the right one, and some interesting things happened that makes me think so. However, I am still on the edge, a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Do you wait to figure out the psychology of the character during the writing, or do you graph that too?
Not exactly sure what you mean by that……..
(Sorry, I don’t really do technical names. I just do whatever I’m going to do. lol. If that makes sense.)
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Andrew replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Are you and @rae a ship now???
Yep, we boarded not to long ago actually… yep, surprise!
Sorry I moved the conversation to here, I didn’t it to be distracting to the people on Animal RP.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Animal RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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HighScribe changed their profile picture 1 year, 10 months ago
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