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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Why thank you 😎
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Drama Queen
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@anyone-who-is-interested
Chapter 1
Strong hands grabbed at her shoulders, trying to rip her away.
But Sef wouldn’t let go.
Eyes scrunched shut, tears leaking from the corners, she clung to her father like he was the only thing keeping her life together.
In a way, he was.
And now he was leaving.
“Let go, Sef,” her mother said stern…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Crystalized was pretty bad, but I don’t think Dragons Rising is very good, either. I could rant about it, but I’m not going to because nobody wants that :p
I’ll just say the thing that bothers me the most about it is the way they’re trampling over all the lore they’ve already established. The stuff they’re introducing just…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
There are a lot of teens/adults who still follow the show from their childhood.
Yeah, that’s pretty much why I still watch it. Nostalgia, plus to cringe at the recent seasons :p
But maybe we should take this conversation elsewhere before Ducktator kicks us off.
Lol perhaps.
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh, yes, my brothers and I, we got so. many. Ninjago. LEGOs.
But we took them all apart now for pieces (and because you literally couldn’t walk on our basement flood) so we have, like, fifty ninja heads lying around. Lol.
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HighScribe replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
@whalekeeper @linus-smallprint
I didn’t even realize other teenagers/adults even liked that show 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Looks like this section is a hit!
I mostly use ESV, but sometimes I’ll use another version if I find it translates the Hebrew/Greek better for the particular verse/passage.
I’m glad you like that scene. It’s one of my fav.
Spring Fever is a real thing. Especially among the teenage guys at our church.
lol.
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HighScribe replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
(Oh my gosh, I was about to use the middle finger emoji to point up 😭 I am so stupid lol! I never EVER use that emoji and I wasn’t looking so I clicked it and then quickly deleted it 😭😭😭😭)
Oh my goodness 😨😱 that is, like, my worst fear. I’m extremely paranoid that either I’ll do something like that on accident, or autocorrect w…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
I don’t know. I see that stuff really fast, but it might just be me. Do you want it to come as a shock?
By the way, do you have any guesses for why Alan was able to defeat his attackers so easily while Stripe was easily beaten?
Two.
One, capturing Alan’s father is a decoy because for some reason the king wants Alan to…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@rae @raxforge @loopylin @hybridlore @jonas @grcr @whalekeeper
Leon and Julian — Elderstrand (w/Group 1)
Leon’s expression clouded with worry as Marcel gestured to his ears. He can’t hear!
Marcel’s next words confirmed the suspicion. “Can’t hear. Are they close?”
Leon shook his head and gave Marcel the Imperial Military “a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@rae @raxforge @loopylin @grcr @hybridlore @jonas @whalekeeper
Leon and Julian— Elderstrand (wsome of Group 1)
Leon watched as the girl raced off, followed by Ben, Flare, and Brutus. Or, was it Baron. Leon’s brows drew together. Something wasn’t right about him. whatever the case, Leon was secretly glad he was gone. though part…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
Stephen and David continued to grow, and Joseph found himself looking up to them in many ways. Mr. Caddick was always a source of wisdom, and Joseph found himself coming to him often. It seemed so strange to Joseph that they all looked up to him,…
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HighScribe replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
Sorry, @the_lost-journal messed up your tag in my post 👆
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HighScribe replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 9 months ago
@the_lost_journal
You guys didn’t even know I was taking a break from KP!
I kind of knew, I saw you hadn’t been very active recently, but I wasn’t sure if it was an ‘official’ break, or if you were just busy. Anyway, glad you’re back 🙂
I love this idea! I think I’ll join, depending on how fast this moves. December is pretty busy for me so i…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
btw, thanks for the “guy-talk” scene. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness.
You’ve ruined me, girl!
oh I couldn’t breathe! I’m crying right now. Oh man, that was such a good, good story! I love the tragedy of it!
Tell your brother he did an amazing job!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh, whoops. I forgot I got hit by a snowball.
Just a sec.
Liam didn’t seem to agree, but he let the matter go.
They were silent a moment. Then, Liam started coughing. It was a small cough at first, but it grew harsher and stronger. “Easy, easy,” Werner said, carefully helping Liam to sit up. He whipped out his handk…
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