Linus Smallprint

@liberty

WHAT IN THE WORLD!!!

Oh you’re gonna pay for that.

If they’re tent is full up maybe we can snag one together if I join.

@the_lost-journal

idk why it’s unfortunate that the first is true for you! It’s true for me too! 😁

The drawings are coming along. I started all three last night. I threw away the one for theducktator because she didn’t turn out the way i wanted her to, so I’ll have to start over. I finished Hybridlore’s, and Carrot Cake is almost done. I like…[Read more]

@loopylin

*gaspeth!*

Rory lost his date!

Hahahah!!!

Not that dancing would have been good for him. He would have freaked out and killed something or run……… buts still. It’s the principle of the matter. *British sniff*

lololololololol

@loopylin

That blasted group is constantly threatening me and stealing my characters. *crosses arms indignantly*

lolololol

And, I’m sorry, but after meeting you in person, you’re too sweet to be a psychopath <3

Aw, thanks!! That’s so kind of you! 🙂

It’s a title I earned on KP after threatening a character Highscribe liked. XD I guess I’m…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Okay…. yes that about matches them!

You haven’t mentioned their biggest character difference which is a slight flaw for each of them.  We’ll see if it gets picked up later on. 😉

@hybridlore

NOTHING! XD

I just told someone to kill off a character that she happened to like……

@esther-c

Sorry I’m just now getting to this!!!!

My main critique would be that you spend a lot of time on dialogue. I kind of feel like we just got thrown into the story and all we know about the characters is because of what they say. Maybe breaking up some dialogue and really showing us who they characters are would help…it kind of feels l…[Read more]

@koshka

Oh my goodness. Love it.

@hybridlore

That title was given to me by a very distressed Highscribe and I bare it proudly.

@hybridlore

Okay I can change that. It won’t do anything to the plot.

Lol 😂😂 I like Roland

haha, me too.

Poor Leon. He is now stuck with two impulsive companions.

Also, I’m starting to see the personality differences between Julian and Leon and I love them 😍

ME TOO!!!!!

Just out of curiosity and to see if I’m getting everything across, w…[Read more]

@hybridlore

no, it makes perfect sense.

He’s an awesome character and I wanna see him more.

He’s my favorite so I want him to die.

@hybridlore

WHAT! NO!! A character like Alec needs a lot more spotlight!!!

He also needs to die.

I WANNA READ CHAPTER 13!!

@loopylin @koshka

Rax and Ben

Rax was excited when he heard Eddie’s response. “Great! Wonderful!” You could never see a smile as big on anyone’s face as on Rax’s. He was filled with joy, for he liked dancing, even though he had only danced formally once or twice, but that made him more excited that he would dance formally again. And to top it…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty

NEXT SECTION!!!

Sorry I’m late. Busy today. But, I think it’s a little longer than normal. 🙂

“Thank you so much for the meal, Liesl. It was wonderful,” Julian said.

Liesl smiled. “I’m glad you liked it.”

“So, what are we doing today?” Roland asked. A…

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@hybridlore

great progress!!!

I love this chapter! You really suck me into the game planning which is great because I normally find scenes like this super boring in books. It’s crazy but whatever you did has made it so that I can completely picture the game!!

I sure like Cole.

When’s Alec coming back? he was my favorite!! *puppy…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I wrote it seriously, but looking back at it it’s kinda funny, lol. I’m glad you found it funny

@keilah-h

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

love the cake!!!!

@koshka

By the way, Syph has no problem dancing with girls. He just is trying to understand how it would work if you weren’t in competition.

Syph is so funny, lol