Linus Smallprint

@freed_and_redeemed

Was my heart pounding or what!!!?? man that was so good!!

And harsh. Poor Riker.

Are you all done with that scene, or do you want any editorial comments?

@freed_and_redeemed

I LOVE THAT SO MUCH

poor Riker <333

@theshadow

If they’re genuine enemies…I’d say just make them constantly arguing or trying to show each other up, and constantly trying to do something better than the other.

Also Pinterest can help a lot with this and give you some ideas!

@theshadow

Anything specific details you want help with?

*description

@lightoverdarkness6

Aww girl I am so sorry, I can’t even imagine how hard that must be!!! You’re so strong for going through that and I promise, everything will turn out the way it’s meant to!! Our Heavenly Father has a wonderful plan of happiness for us, and the trials and challenges we face now will seem like nothing when we return to Him and h…

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@grcr

It’s not bad! I immediately thought of the soldier characters from Equilibrium…… which are actually evil. lol.

Ok, maybe it is kinda villainous…..

@lightoverdarkness6 @rae

Btw have you seen The Boys In The Boat

I was literally just about to ask that! lol.

That movie was so good!

@ellette-giselle

I forget the dialogue and exposition. XD

@savannah_grace2009

 

BUT YOUR SHORT STORY ON YOUR MAGAZINE WAS SO GOOD I GOT CHILLS!!!!

Thank you!!!! You just made my day!!

@ellette-giselle

Aw I’m sorry! I am the same way so you’re not alone!!!!!!!!!

BUT YOUR SHORT STORY ON YOUR MAGAZINE WAS SO GOOD I GOT CHILLS!!!!

I’ll ask one of my guy friends tonight for ya! XD XD

I get that it would be awkward so I got you girl

@savannah_grace2009

 

I get that! Just let us know if you’re ever sick of critiques and just want to hear the positive stuff to get encouraged!

Haha, but that would be all the time…… lol. I don’t like getting told there’s something wrong with my book, but I also know that it will NEVER get better if I don’t have real help from people l…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Aw I’m sorry :/

I get that! Just let us know if you’re ever sick of critiques and just want to hear the positive stuff to get encouraged!

I’d say…just interview some of your guy friends and ask them to give you a cheat sheet XD XD but I think Whaley’s right, they really do just vibe lol

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009

Thanks so much! I’m feeling a bit better now.

I had a really rough, hectic day at work, and it’s just one of those days when I want to cry about everything. You know? (Girls, you know what I mean. Linus is probably lost. haha)

As for the 4 book thing, I don’t think I have enough to do 4 books. I will try…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thank you!

And so cool!

@ellette-giselle

Um, yeah. His fear of the unknown already came up a little bit in the barn, and though he got over it there, it is still under the surface and it will come again. I promise.

Maybe you could make his fear a lot stronger, like showing us his thoughts instead of telling us them?

“Well then I don’t see how much help you’ll be,”…

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