Linus Smallprint

@keilah-h

Unless you have something exponentially more important, I’d say go for it.

Why? What reason do I have?

(not to sound dark or depressed. But is it truly worth it?)

@koshka

Rory

Rory slid back, but his eyes were locked on Leo’s hands in a half memorized, half terrified stare. There was a very bad memory at the edge of his mind, and he didn’t know what it was, but he really didn’t want it let out.

@linus-smallprint

I know. *sobs*

Okay, sounds good. Maybe next week?

*sighs* some of this feedback is depressing. I wonder……. these books were written so long ago and comparing them to the stuff I have written now, they’re just not as good at all. Are they even worth trying to rewrite? Rewriting is so hard….. is the message and…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yay!!!!

aw, thanks for making me laugh. Smaug the laptop ate two years of historical research and I’m so not happy.

I’ll look at this right away!

btw, do you still need me to wait until April now that you sent this?

@koshka

leaving the kid anywhere didn’t seem…wise. He had a back for getting into pickles.

Love that!

Rory

Rory winced slightly at the list Leo had rattled off. He’d used just about every one of those things. And the memories that accompanied the usage were bad. Very bad.

“Looks like we’ve got most of this. Ready for a blowtorch?” Leo asked…[Read more]

@koshka

Rory

Rory’s eyebrows went up. “You build bombs?”

He dropped to his knees beside Leo and instantly recoiled with a stifled gasp of pain. He quickly shifted to a sitting position, absently rubbing his injured knee. Something sharp pricked his other hand and he held up a thin shard. “I found another.”

@koshka

Rory

Rory stared at him. “Is it kind of like tactics? You know, attack plans. The officers organize all the troops so that they can effortlessly wipe out the target.” He paused and chewed on his lower lip. “Maybe not…”

@koshka

You could read his story if you wanted. You never replied after the last chapter I sent.

But you might not like it.

Rory

Rory blinked at the shattered pieces. “Jigsaw puzzle?”

He clenched and unclenched his gloved hands. He was still getting over the water incident. Leo acted like it was all normal, but Rory had never seen anything…[Read more]

@koshka

Ah yes! I would love to see his tactics! Rory is going to pick up so many bad, (possibly useful) habits.

Yeah… well he’s still been through worse. Maybe not physically at this point in his life, but he’s in a far better situation than he was, busted up or not. And as for later…….. this is gentle compared.

@koshka

Then write it!!!!!

WRITE! WRITE! WRITE!

And I won’t stop chanting until you send me a section.

Must read!

@koshka

No! Really? I RPed weeks ago. Does that mean….. KP ATE MY POST!!!! *sobbing brokenly*

sure, whatever works for you!

Well, someone had better stop Mateo, and I really don’t want Leo to die.

Rory is fine. He’s had far worse.

@koshka

Yes!!! He 100% does!

You must write the book! I must read! *sob*

@koshka
Yes, there were two that really fit him. Actually three. Both Andrew Peterson songs, and the first vocal song. (I think it was an alevation worship one.)

@loopylin

Yes killing please.

@raxforge

Literally, I’m about to jump Rory a few years forward in his character arc and send him up there to trounce you!

Or….. I could call the agents back and have them deal with him…….

Hmmm.

@koshka

That was fun! I really got a feel for him!

@koshka

FUN!!!! I’ll take a listen!

@rae

First off, funny forum signature.

*bows* Thank you.

Second, what are the ages of your characters?

The character who knows she’s about to die is about 18, as is her best friend. Her grandfather is 70ish. Her grandfather and best friend are the only ones who know.

It also depends on if they’re Christians or not.

They are not at the moment. I s…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh congratulations! I’m trying to get a job. I’ve applied at a Kroger, and I’m going to apply for an ice cream place later today or tomorrow. But yeah, I don’t have much free time as is, and that’s going to take what I do have. 🙁

Lilitu, what have you done????

@theducktator

Agh yes I am lol

I’ve missed being on here :/

I’ve been so busy between school and work! (I recently got a job at a coffee shop which is good because I get money! But hard because I don’t have as much free time anymore!)

@savannah_grace2009

You’re alive! I was starting to wonder where you’d gone. *goes to find chapters*