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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Well first off, Happy Early Birthday!!!
Second, here are two thoughts. 1.) you don’t have to make it an all day thing, you know. Often times with my family on a kid’s birthday it’s something simple. Such as, “Hey, ***** wants to go for a bike ride for his birthday. We’ll be at the trail head at 3:00 and we’ll bike until 5:00, then…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr  @whalekeeper  @power
NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(48)
Again, only 1. Barely got this one done. no time to sit down and write and had to do it in little bits.
Next week I hope to really get a good flow.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic Rant away! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Wow, I just watched a video of someone playing one and that is so cool.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
HAPPY 4TH OF JULY!!!
I hope y’all have a great day!!! It’s been such a blessing to get to know several of y’all this past year!! May God bless you today!
Here are some great quotes to remember amid all the fireworks and fun!
“The cost of freedom is always high but Americans have always paid it.”
~John F Kennedy“The real…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Aw good!! It was believable then?
You may have to email me for that other question. Not exactly sure what you’re asking.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr  @whalekeeper  @power
NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(47)
Only 1. I ran out of time to get the other done and I haven’t found a solid chunk of time to sit down. Barely got this one done.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr  @whalekeeper  @power
New chapters should be out today, but I noticed no one but Hybridlore has read the ones I posted yesterday, (45-46)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I think you’re on Chapter 40.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Sure thing!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
TO EVERYONE
A few tags
@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @theducktator @whalekeeper @rae

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore    @koshka    @keilah-h     @elishavet-pidyon     @theducktator    @grcr  @whalekeeper  @power
NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sits back and smiles*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I know!! That quote is just AMAZING!!! I would love to see more of him!
Yes, it was a little bit flat in places, and maybe it could use some reworking, but honestly I think 1st person would spoil it. I liked all the scenes you had and the way you laid it out, even if it could use a teeny bit of work. That’s what I’m trying to say.…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Sorry! I just saw this.
Hmmm…. I don’t like first person naritives… so that already makes me biased, but I honestly really liked that chapter the way it is. Like, a LOT. I don’t want you to touch it. If it’s the chapter I’m thinking of (the end one) it was one of my very favorites.
You can try the first person, but I say leave…[Read more]
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