Linus Smallprint

@jonas

Well i think where we left off, Ottoline was terrified of Ellis (as usual) and she was setting up targets to practice, and Ellis and Snake were talking about what weapons they can use.

@esther-c

That’s so cool! That would be fun!

@highscribeofaetherium

Lol your new profile pic is so confusing. I keep thinking you’re GRCR 😂

Same!!! I thought I was the only one, lol

@rar

Lol your new profile pic is so confusing. I keep thinking you’re GRCR 😂

@rae

Are Fennin and the Queen still there, or did they leave? Zahlin has some words for Fennin.

@fernweh_grace

Of course!

@jonas

okay, sounds good.

@rae

No, you didn’t botch him at all.

@jonas

I feel like I just went…XD Rae went too…so I think its either you or HighScribe’s turn. Unless you really don’t want to, lol

@esther-c

I’m glad I was able to help!

@jonas

Ok I guess…

@jonas

He seems rather OP lol.

Zahlin

Zahlin slowly nodded and extended his hand to pull Nahim to his feet. “Peace of Honor.”

Now that his adrenaline was wearing off, pain flared in his various wounds. Zahlin slumped against the wall and slowly slid down to the ground, breathing heavily.

Footsteps pounded in the hallway. The door swung open.

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Ok, this is taking too lon…[Read more]

@jonas

I guess we are. I have a character I might add…

I guess I’ve been stuck on what Zahlin should do now… 🤷‍♀️

@srae

Yes, I’m writing an RP now… how do you guys write them so fast? 😅

@fernweh_grace

I happened to stumble upon this by chance….and I’m glad I did! Your writing is beautiful! It’s so sad….but beautiful! (you should publish this…)

@esther-c

I read the chapter, and I think I see what you mean.

I wouldn’t say that your problem is the lack of action. I think the way you opened with the painting scene is a great introduction. It introduces Ami’s character, how she’s artistic, what she values, what kind of person she is. So it definitely doesn’t need more action. The way you…[Read more]

Just kidding, I’ll start at :55. I have to get pumpkin pie first, lol.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

*sighs* Okay, I changed my mind again.

I’m not doing first person (you’re welcome, Jonas, lol).

But I am in a sense, starting over.

Before you freak out, let me explain.

I’m still keeping the original beginning (Elysium, Pythonos, A Swift Death, A Thief, Gone, Stolen, and An Orphan). So bas…[Read more]