Linus Smallprint

@jonas

okay, sounds good.

@rae

No, you didn’t botch him at all.

@jonas

I feel like I just went…XD Rae went too…so I think its either you or HighScribe’s turn. Unless you really don’t want to, lol

@esther-c

I’m glad I was able to help!

@jonas

Ok I guess…

@jonas

He seems rather OP lol.

Zahlin

Zahlin slowly nodded and extended his hand to pull Nahim to his feet. “Peace of Honor.”

Now that his adrenaline was wearing off, pain flared in his various wounds. Zahlin slumped against the wall and slowly slid down to the ground, breathing heavily.

Footsteps pounded in the hallway. The door swung open.

***

Ok, this is taking too lon…[Read more]

@jonas

I guess we are. I have a character I might add…

I guess I’ve been stuck on what Zahlin should do now… 🤷‍♀️

@srae

Yes, I’m writing an RP now… how do you guys write them so fast? 😅

@fernweh_grace

I happened to stumble upon this by chance….and I’m glad I did! Your writing is beautiful! It’s so sad….but beautiful! (you should publish this…)

@esther-c

I read the chapter, and I think I see what you mean.

I wouldn’t say that your problem is the lack of action. I think the way you opened with the painting scene is a great introduction. It introduces Ami’s character, how she’s artistic, what she values, what kind of person she is. So it definitely doesn’t need more action. The way you…[Read more]

Just kidding, I’ll start at :55. I have to get pumpkin pie first, lol.

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium

*sighs* Okay, I changed my mind again.

I’m not doing first person (you’re welcome, Jonas, lol).

But I am in a sense, starting over.

Before you freak out, let me explain.

I’m still keeping the original beginning (Elysium, Pythonos, A Swift Death, A Thief, Gone, Stolen, and An Orphan). So bas…[Read more]

@esther-c

Ugh, sorry you’re going through that! That’s hard!

Could you maybe post some segments of it so I can see more of what you mean?

All I can say is that maybe you’re focusing a little too much on all the potential problems. (I’m speaking from experience) Sometimes you need a little break, or maybe you’re overthinking it. If its boring to…[Read more]

I’m gonna do a sprint, i’ll probably start at :50 and end at :20 or something like that, if anyone wants to join.

@jonas

Yeah, I think just adding villains to this one will work.

@rae

I have to go now, bye.`

@rae

Zahlin

Zahlin sidestepped Nahim’s lunge. The Sword spoke for the first time since the fight had broken out. “ONE OF YOU RUN FOR FENNIN! NOW!” It shouted at the two onlookers. Out of the corner of his eye Zahlin saw someone disappear out the door.

Zahlin caught Nahim’s arm and slammed him into the anvil. Nahim twisted, leveling his blade a…[Read more]