Linus Smallprint

Sorry that was kinda long, XD

@everyone

Here’s the first chapter of my revisions to my Andromeda WIP! Anyone have any critiques?

Newborn light sifted between the windows, piercing the darkness.

Through the smudged glass, Sef could see the Andromedan sunrise, she could see the indigo trees dancing as the wind pushed them to and fro.

The morning was beautiful, and it called…

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@hybridlore

I’d never heard of sprints either!

Speaking of sprints…I’m sprinting till :30.

@hybridlore

btw, I love your signature!

@hybridlore

nice!

@loopylin

lol!

@esther-c

I love his logic, lol

@esther-c

Kian’s logic is flawless lol

Jonas is going to be the only one to really get this but whatever.

Vethe

Vethe needed to stab someone. Badly. When Kalary is upset, she lapses into stony silence. She thought. But not Vethe. No, Vethe needs to scream. Vethe needs to make people hurt. Vethe needs to make the whole universe feel her pain. She glared after Marcurious. He couldn’t be trusted. Nobody here could be trusted. Dlek was the sanest p…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh, Marcurious, you’re in for a rude awakening.

Marcurious

He walked away from the people, rolling his eyes. How could they call him a liar? Obviously they were delusional.

And then he had an idea.

Walking up to the throne, he bowed his head. “Your majesty, since you pulled me here, could you please verify that my world is called Andromeda? Because right now there are people threatening to k…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

So it’s a culmination of a lot of things and now she’s on the verge of a temper tantrum 😅

poor Vethe…:((

Marcurious

“I’m sorry, but you’re wrong,” Marcurious called over his shoulder. “Absolutely wrong. You’re lying. I happen to hate liars,” he repeated what she had said earlier. “No matter what you do to me, I will s…[Read more]

@euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @rae

Sorry, guys, I just now saw this, KP is ridiculous with notifications lol 😂

@everyone

I think my favorite part so far is at the birthday party, when the hobbits get a present from Bilbo, and then sneak out the back way to get another one 😂😂😂

@highscribeofaetherium

I read it once a few years ago when I was like 10…but I forgot so much of it it’s like I’ve never read it XD

@euodia-vision

I love it so far! The prose is beautiful, and the story is so good!

Vethe

Vethe seethed. “I’ve been to all twelve planets!” She shouted after him, “There is no Andromeda! There are no more planets! I come from no place!” She looked around for something to throw at him. “And how can I know that that isn’t a lie?”

@savannah_grace2009

She’s very stubborn and deeply mistrusting. To add to that, she’s been thrown…[Read more]

Marcurious

“And what’s more,” he continued, “If I were lying, I would not be able to speak without my powers leaving me. My powers do not work unless I am telling the truth.”