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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I guess it’s just a VERY LARGE eagle….XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I just looked it up and apparently an eagle can barely carry 20 pounds…..Oh, well….it’s fantasy so…….
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Yep, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
i love that scene!!!!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Marcurious
“Rideable?” Marcurious screeched. “If you think I will allow you to ‘ride’ me like a horse, than you are sorely mistaken!” the man glared at him. “Fine. But you will not ride me.”
So Marcurious closed his eyes and changed into a large eagle. Before the man knew what was happening, Marcurious launched up and grabbed the man…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh, and I don’t know what the theme color would be, probably light blue/gray? Idk, you can decide.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 years, 10 months ago
Hey, do you want to make another one for Lilitu?
He has black hair with blue streaks in it, he has a twisted foot so he limps a lot. He was saved from the river as a baby because his parents set him adrift to save him from being kidnapped by the Pythonos. He was rescued and adopted by a loving couple. He has a crush on Sef but can’t…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Vethe
Vethe ran down hallways and dodged around corners, looking for a way out.
Suddenly, something whistled past her ear and embedded itself in the wall. A knife.
Great. She thought, turning another corner and dodging another flying knife. You’re dead, Vethe. You are so dead.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Marcurious
He watched in awe as Vethe was choked by a black vapor. Cool! Well, it wasn’t cool for Vethe, but seriously, those king’s powers were awesome! Except the fact that he almost killed someone, but still…
“Fetch her! You will not, I can,” the king said.
Marcurious seriously did not want to be Vethe right now…
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HighScribe replied to the topic Worldbuilding help and discussions! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
*materialized out of nowhere and hits subscribe button before melting stealthily back into the shadows*
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
😭😭😭😭😭😭 (oh dear, I almost put a barfing emoji in there)
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Oh no XD
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Vethe
Vethe coughed, rising to her feet. “I don’t think you and I are going to get along very well.” She said, laying a hand on her sword. “You don’t strike me as a very good king.”
And with that she ran.
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Congratulations, Koshtin, it seems like Vethe’s going to defect without even fighting the heroes 🤦♀️
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years, 10 months ago
You guys have already read the next chapter, the one where Lilitu steals the loaf of bread. So I’ll skip to the fourth chapter, when Lilitu’s walking home from his thievery, lol
And as always, don’t feel like you have to read it. I don’t want anybody panicking, lol
Chapter 4: Strange Magick
Lilitu stood at the edge of…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic One More Chance – A Story by R.A.E. in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, I was a little worried about that…do you think it would help if I gave Brenna’s master a name? The young soldier must remain unnamed, for my own reasons, but I could give the master a name. I’ll rearrange the paragraphs so it’s easier to understand what’s going on.
Yeah, I think that would help a lot.
For the title, maybe “Murderer”?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
you’re fine!! no worries! 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic One More Chance – A Story by R.A.E. in the forum Short Story Critiques 2 years, 10 months ago
Yeah, I noticed the same thing as Freedom. It did get a little confusing. But overall it’s really good!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic LOTR: Fellowship of the Ring in the forum Book Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Um….I just listened to it and….how?????
How is that physically possible! that’s kinda disturbing, XD
It’s so good though!
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HighScribe replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Vethe
The King had a point. If she was in Celestiar, what planet was she on?
“Very well,” She said, “And if I leave?” Vethe glared at the King. “What’s to stop me from walking out of this room? You have no power over me.”
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