Linus Smallprint

@keilah-h @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theducktator @grcr @rae

Congratulations everyone!

Yeah, when I saw GRCR I thought, “Game over, that’s the winner” lol. It was an amazing rendition of him!! Great job!!

Who would like to submit the next description?

I would unless someone else is going…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I missed that you preferred younger characters. You can skip Nicholas if you want.

@theducktator

I look at maps whenever a place is mentioned XD

And because maps are just cool!!! lol

I told him only nerds use the maps. He said only nerds read fantasy novels. Touché. 😂

@keilah-h

Tumors? lol

@ellette-giselle @anyone-else

Next chapter…be warned…this one is a little *coughs* sad…and dark and it deals with a really sad reality in our world. So continue reading at your own risk.

Chapter 8

Sticks and Stones

Sef cowered before the large man, blinking back tears.

She wanted to scream with frustration. She had been late again!

She…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yeah, I was wondering if that was the case! Glad I was able to help!!! 😊

Yes! I love how easy it is to share chapters!

Yeah it took me FOREVER to figure out how to use it, but after over a year of using it I have never ever wanted to go back!

This is the language we came up with…kind of:

All the consonants you gave:

t l n m r k s p sh b f v z d j g w th

Vowels:

let’s just say it’s English vowels for now.

These are the “swears” we came up with:
Scist (Scisto)

Dissar (Dissaros)

And idk what else…XD

@thearcaneaxiom

hahaha

okay

let me go back real quick then…

@thearcaneaxiom

Okay, Tlavian it is! XD why are you so good at this!?!?!

@ellette-giselle

I actually do show a scene of the kids working in the next chapter, and then a couple chapters after that…just wait XD

Okay, good ideas!

I just don’t know how to reveal it all…because those ideas sound so good but when I try to do stuff like that it feels either rushed or too slow 😭😭😭 I’ll figure it out somehow lol

And…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

sorry, I didn’t tag you! ⬆️

@freed_and_redeemed

I love it!!

ok, we’ll of course I’m still weeding through the world and all that. Someone else already mentioned it, but I would like to hear a little more about the work/slavery/and separation. Maybe a seen or two of the kids working? How about a bad Run-in between Lilitu and the Aquinos before hand and maybe a scene where he sets off to find his par…[Read more]

@rae

The ducklings are SO CUTE!!!!!😍

@rae

It’s so sad. 😭

@rae

Tomoko is so good!

@rae

The librarian actually knew exactly what book I needed. It’s called the Anarchist’s Cookbook.

@ellette-giselle

Thank you sooo much, do you have any thoughts/ comments??? I’d love to hear them!