Linus Smallprint

@linus-smallprint

Interesting. My line of thinking was that the Bible says A.) the world will see us as fools and the gospel will sound foolish to them, and B.) Christ said to let the children come to him, for of such is the kingdom of heaven, and unless we believe like children we will not enter.

@linus-smallprint

Great! I have just started Chapter 6, but I’m in the middle of shooting one character and saving another, so I need to finish up with all that. lol. Then I’ll keep reading.

Here are my notes so far…..

Notes For The Narrow Path Trilogy

Ok Linus, I’m going to take notes as I go.

Prologue:
It’s really good, and It’…[Read more]

@kathleenramm

Pictures aren’t working again. They won’t show up.

@highscribeofaetherium

True. We could name him Great Googly Moogly. That’s screamable, even though it’s long.

@ellette-giselle

I suppose…

@theducktator

But Cud isn’t frightening at all! It makes him sound like a cow!

@linus-smallprint

Great! Thank you! Yeah, like I mentioned before I’ve been reading through it! I’ve been taking notes, though I didn’t see the questions for readers. Are you interested in the notes I have so far?

Oh, I will bother you for chapters. Don’t encourage me. haha

@linus-smallprint

Wow, thank you so much! This is very helpful.

Yes, I will definitely talk to the boys (my brothers) about this, though they are a lot younger then Aaron and Turin, so it might be different for them, (right?)

Thanks again so much for taking the time to write all this out and explain it! This is totally going to help so much!

I…[Read more]

@rae

I love it!

@highscribeofaetherium

We could nickname him Cud.

@linus-smallprint

Great. So far I’ve been reading through and I think I’m on chapter seven…. ? I’ve been jotting down notes as I go. i don’t know if you’re interested in them or not.

Did you see the newest LTBL section I posted?

@highscribeofaetherium

ACK! Someone go deal with whatever is eating the pictures!!!

@highscribeofaetherium

I’m going to see if I can post a picture.

@highscribeofaetherium

And eating up beautiful characters deserves a wicked name!!

@highscribeofaetherium

correct. Wyoh had just been banished.

I’m putting way too much thought into this XD

Is this new ghost a he, then?

@ellette-giselle

Hmm, neither of those sound quite right to me, they sound a bit too evil. But if other ppl like them then I’m good with em.

(Viper is very nice and scream-able, though)

I can’t think of any suggestions at the moment, I’m a bit groggy rn.

You joined after the time when Wyoh (the old KP ghost)…[Read more]

@rae

Yep, highscribe is right. It’s also too friendly. I mean, how dare they eat our pictures!!! This needs to be a horrible terrible villain who is completely depraved and the worst of all master villains because he chews up beautiful characters before THEY EVER SEE THE LIGHT OF DAY!!!!

How about Diablo or Viper!

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, two things. I would suggest reading this scene out-loud, because there were a few sentences that felt a little jarring and out of flow with the rest. They just needed a different word arrangement or different punctuation.

The other thing would be a suggestion, and that would be this. When Leon is running toward the…[Read more]

@theshadow

Awesome!