@linus-smallprint
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Okay, okay, he’s making an almost funny jab at things. So, backstory:
most of the time when he tries to do things like speak out against something that Disney did that was really wrong, (like making movies where homosexual relationships are encouraged) or saying that this or that was wrong that so and so did, or anything like that,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@linus-smallprin
YIKES! You changed your pic!
I was like, who is talking to me?
haha, maybe it is a bit dramatic, but I like mine better.
Ah, okay, not your cup of tea.
I don’t really care for this term. Nothing against you, but some people have used it in some rather…. degrading ways around me. Basically saying that my faith had nothing…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Sure, your character can meet up with mine if ye want.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Hello! Hello!
Wonderful! First feedback! (I’ve over here being excited about crazy things like this)
Think this is a good opening. It sets a darker stage than the previous book, but you warned us.
Yes, I am going for a darker stage.
Also, how the characters act makes sense. Joseph is traumatized and Sabina is trying to be…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.
Frustrating charrie.
YES! 100%
Julian would have shrugged and walked away by now, but Leon used to be that frustrating character, and now he’s trying to do the only thing that was done to him that pulled him out of that downward spin.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I finished school this morning. I get up at five to do it and I work fast, Reading and writing are a strong point of mine, and I have a lot of that. I normally finish around ten.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
BTW anyone is free to meet up with Klethen, I think my RP for him in on page 6 or something (even though I only wrote it a couple hours ago XD)
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Wow. How do you guys RP so much with school???
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge
Leon sighed, his stiff posture relaxing slightly. “I don’t know who they are. But you seem like you’re in trouble.” He took a step forward. “I don’t want to drive you away. I would much rather help you, and perhaps fight beside you against whatever hunts you, b…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge
Leon’s tone matched the stern look on his face. “Then I suggest you leave. If you are not willing to take a risk and trust people, yet you are willing to take the risk of attacking someone you don’t even know, then you need to stay away. I will not have you ki…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
btw, is Brutus Baron’s name, because if it’s not I’d like him to give his name as “Baron” soon, because this whole two different name thing is starting to get me mixed up.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge
Leon rolled to his feet, the dagger still in his hand. Julian scrambled up and lunged at Brutus, but Leon yanked him back. “Good Lord, he’s something else.”
Carefully Leon moved to place himself between Brutus and Ben. “Everyone needs to calm down.” He pointed at B…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Ooops…
Ben grabbed the man’s arm, trying to loosen it, but it was no use. “My- name- is- Ben- Gunn- who- are- you?”
Remove this and keep the rest.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle started the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
HELLO!!!
So excited because today is November and now I can release the beginning of the second book in my saga!
(tagging a few others who might have been reading the first one. @koshka @elishavet-pidyon)
Again, this is in draft form still, so feedback and critiques are welcome.
The Veil of Night
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Flare, Ben Gunn – With Baron, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
Ben grabbed the man’s arm, trying to loosen it, but it was no use. “My- name- is- Ben- Gunn- who- are- you?”
Flare, being knocked off his feet, got up. He looked at the scene that was happening. He hesitated for a moment. Then he grabbed his lute and began t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Leon and Julian—With Flare, Ben Gunn, and Baron, Everstrand edge
“Hey, get off of him!” Julian yelled, rushing at Brutus. He crashed into the young man, Knocking him against the wall.
In a flash, Leon was at his side, dagger poised. “What is going on with you? Stop attacking innocent people!”
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Didn’t this topic only have 4 pages yesterday? 😂
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