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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Alright, I will.
Shorter section, but I want to make sure Joseph is making sense and his character is developing well before I post more.
A week passed.
For Joseph, it was a time of raw pain. He had always been shy and quiet, but now he seemed even more so. He seemed older than his years, and…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Oh that sounds amazing!!! Oh I would love, love, love that! If I do go down there someday, would you be willing to meet me?
How old is the age cut-off?
Do you know the dates?
Does it cost?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Oh I know that. I just think it’s so cool that you’ve seen them in person!
You should go to called conference. You’d love it
To what conference?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
What do you mean by that?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
So do you still live around there?
Were you ever at one of his Sabbath dinners?
have you met THEE Nate Wilson?
Or Brian Cole?
Or Rachel and Becka?
Oh, or Christine Cohen!!!???
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
I mean, didn’t you used to think, when you were a little kid, that your dad was equal to super man, and your mom was flawless? (I sure did)
Now that we’re older, we can understand that they are just human, but when we are young, mom and dad can do anything and they’ve never once done something wrong in their lives.
The adults…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
It benefits you, the reader.
We know Aaron was not the perfect man Joseph thought he was.
We now know Sabina is not the strong, fearless young woman that Joseph thinks she is.
We can see the flaws in Joseph’s thinking, and understand them, but they are flaws.
Plus, I can’t go kill the poor thing’s Fiance without giving…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
He’s kinda one of my heroes. I love his stuff, and his attitude, and….. well…… I buy almost all my books from Canon and have the canon app, and have always wanted to go to Moscow Idaho to visit him. (And also talk to Nate, but I’d have to be ready to have my books destroyed. lol)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Uh, I may just have to die on this hill. I really, really need that scene.
It will become clear as soon as the next few scenes are posted.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Yep! He’s an amazing guy! And very chill and funny.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
WAIT! DOUG WILSON was your pastor!!!!
No way!!!
I have always dreamed of meeting him in person!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Just look it up and watch from 2018 to now. They each have a little piece of backstory, if you want to know.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
It’s only evil if someone uses it for evil (and how, exactly, do you do that with Legos, may I ask? Lol)
You leave them on a well traveled floor.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
AW! Thank you so much!!!!
I’ll make sure to tag you as I add more!
Would you like a brief summery of the last book, or do you just want to figure things out from here?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Okay, okay, he’s making an almost funny jab at things. So, backstory:
most of the time when he tries to do things like speak out against something that Disney did that was really wrong, (like making movies where homosexual relationships are encouraged) or saying that this or that was wrong that so and so did, or anything like that,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
@linus-smallprin
YIKES! You changed your pic!
I was like, who is talking to me?
haha, maybe it is a bit dramatic, but I like mine better.
Ah, okay, not your cup of tea.
I don’t really care for this term. Nothing against you, but some people have used it in some rather…. degrading ways around me. Basically saying that my faith had nothing…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Sure, your character can meet up with mine if ye want.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Hello! Hello!
Wonderful! First feedback! (I’ve over here being excited about crazy things like this)
Think this is a good opening. It sets a darker stage than the previous book, but you warned us.
Yes, I am going for a darker stage.
Also, how the characters act makes sense. Joseph is traumatized and Sabina is trying to be…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Sorry that Brutus is so difficult. I’m not trying to make him that way, he just is.
Frustrating charrie.
YES! 100%
Julian would have shrugged and walked away by now, but Leon used to be that frustrating character, and now he’s trying to do the only thing that was done to him that pulled him out of that downward spin.
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