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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 3 days ago
10?
I think?
Maybe 12.
Come to think of it, he might be twelve for the age gap between him and Asher.
Never mind.
I might make them only a year apart because I actually like that better for his arch.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Klethen — Elderstrand, on a roof
Klethen looked at Ilahna in confusion. She must be from someplace very far away, he thought.
“What… never mind, can you get down again?”
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 3 days ago
Klethen — Elderstrand, on a roof
Ilahna suggested they find out where they were. Klethen agreed immediately.
“It is odd, that neither of us know where we are.” He said, “How did you get here?” He glanced over the edge of the roof. “And how did you get up here?” The roof was relatively low, but there was no stair or ladder. And by the l…[Read more]
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Thanks!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
*cough* Imagine being motivated. *cough*
When’s the deadline? And do we post the story itself, or a link?
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Klethen — Elderstrand
“Klethen.” He said, “Pleased to meet you.”
He wasn’t sure what ‘Voice’ meant, or if 4 was supposed to be impressive or not, but he didn’t want to ask, so he let that be.
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Not sure what else to write so it’s short.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
nice
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Okay good. I’ll keep going then.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Klethen – Elderstrand
Klethen started slightly when a voice called out to him, asking if he could tell them where they were. He looked around and saw a figure standing a few rooftops away. It was too dark to see much but he could tell it was a woman by the voice.
“No, I came here by accident, and you’re the first person I’ve seen.”…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
I was writing mine yesterday, but after 45 minutes I was at 1,610, and now I’m wondering when a short story stops being a short story and becomes a novella.
Is there a word limit?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Oh dear.
I’ve never gotten that response! Not even when I killed Aaron!
I think i like it…… *evil grin* lol.
No, but it is good to know that you feel for my boy.
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Andrew McLaurin replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
*Blink* Holy cow! I was gone for like 6 hours and I see 3 more pages, lol.
Flare, Ben Gunn – With Baron, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge
Ben was clenching his throat. “Hey, I could’ve fought back, I just decided not to.”
“Sure, that’s what happened.” Flare rolled his reptile eyes. “I’m Flare. Hope you liked my song.” H…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
This is great! I think it sets the stage for the next chapter much better! I like it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
I tried that, and for some reason there was an error and it won’t let me. I can try again tho.
Thanks for the help.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
yeah, I can close off the week gap. I might say “a day or two” or something like that. Would this be better.
I think you meant to say someone else’s voice.
Ah, yes, I do. thanks.
Poor Joseph. I would be a little curious to know what it was like for him when he lost his own father. Does he ever see his face in the n…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
That’s fair. I feel the same way about ‘you do you’.
don’t even get me started.
With Alan down, he would probably try to step in and would not be willing in the least be to let Rour go. So Rour isn’t in a winning position yet. Do you have any ideas for this?
Hmm……
Let’s see.
Well, would Stripe care to protect Alan? I didn’…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle and Loopy are now friends 3 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
Do you know when the registration opens? I can’t seem to find anything besides dates for 2025.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 4 days ago
btw, I told mom you had met Doug, and were from around there, and she was like “Oh my goodness! Did you tell were our family LOVES all the stuff down there!?”
We are looking into the Called Conference right now. Thank you for telling me about it, because I’ll barely squeak in before I’m too old!
this is pretty crazy to me. lol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 4 days ago
I feel kinda bad for traumatizing this child.
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