Linus Smallprint

@the_lost-journal

Welcome back!

@savannah_grace2009

Now I’m concerned.

@savannah_grace2009

Very well done scene!

It’s also a major plot twist lol

@everyone

What do you guys think of this scene….

It’s kind of messy but it’s also supposed to be that way, like it’s a flashback…I’m trying to make it a little confusing, but not too much.

When Nami dared to open her eyes, she breathed a sigh of relief.

The men were gone.

Tigin had screamed at her, threatening her with matches and a…

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@the_lost-journal

YAYYYYY you’re back!!!!!

*throws confetti*

@keilah-h
Aww tysmmm

@lightoverdarkness6

Girl thank you so much <333

@stephie

You know you’re a writer when you sometimes can’t shut your brain off when you go to bed, so you just give up and make up stories all night.

Been there, done that.

@raxforge

Or if you’ve barely started all of them, and just have forgotten first pages all over the house.😂

@the_lost-journal

It’s a weekend camp some people from my church go to every year. It’s in winter, so that’s why it’s called snow camp (though it doesn’t seem like there’s gonna be any snow this year :/). I’m leaving tomorrow.

I’m 15.

I don’t like math so I didn’t care to do it!( ^-^)

I relate to this sentence lol.

Also, your signature is funny.

@rae

Alright! I’ll try to get some feedback to you later today, it might take a bit.

@rae

I read the first part, and this is great! Are you looking more for a sentence-by-sentence critique, or just overall feedback?

Today if I can.

@jonas

Ok, I’ll try to do something, hopefully before Snow Camp.

@the_lost-journal

lol, it’s alright, glad to have you back 👍

@raxforge

*nods emphatically*

@ellette-giselle

Thanks, you can tell by the following post that I got the reaction I wanted from her, lol

@esther-c

I know, it’s super sad, especially since they were so close.

Thanks, I’m hoping to pull it off. I have a very sweet scene in mind that’s going to link all of this if I can just pull it right and it’s really as sweet on paper as it is in my head.

@the_lost-journal

well we’ll see you around.

@raxforge

Haha, that’s great!

@loopylin

That last one is awesome! It makes me think of the KP snowball fight! lol

@the_lost-journal

Aw, sorry to hear that mate. Hopefully see you around Lord willing