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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Don’t look at me.
My guys are just normal people with some military training.
@whalekeeper @grcr @raxforge @loopylin @jonas
Leon and Julian —Group 1, Elderstrand edge
Julian looked up and his eyes widened. He yanked Leon back. “Look out!”
Leon spun, gripping his sword tightly. His eyes and mouth opened in shock. “What are t…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
This is one of the best ones yet!!
I’m curious, did you write this from scratch, or was it in the draft?
This was super well done, and I like everything about it. (though i did see a typo here and there.)
Very well done.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Yes, it’s the Iliad and the Odyssey as a musicale and it was SO WELL done!
oooo, next chapter! Yay!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
dun dun dun!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @keilah-h
LONG Section!!!!!
Darrien lost his job the next morning.
The Governor decided that if the main part of the city was rebuilt, the work could stop. This left a group of neighborhoods to the east in terrible disarray, and it wasn’t long before only thieves and war refugees inhabited them.
To e…
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@anyone
So, I just read Pride and Prejudice for co-op, and now I want to watch one of the movies. Which one is the best one?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Thank you!
Wasn’t exactly what i was going for, but okay. I can see that.
Which Pride and Prejudice version? (there is only one right answer.lol)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @grcr @hybridlore @raxforge @rae
Leon and Julian– Group 1
Leon had his sword drawn in seconds, and before he engaged the first enemy, Julian was at his shoulder. For a moment it was a wild skirmish, and everything was shouts and blows in the dark.
All at once, the fight died away.
Julian wiped rainwater from his e…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Okay, well as long as it’s not bad I’ll keep it. But i will keep an eye on it. Thanks for pointing it out.
Ah. From what you said, I would expect you live on a prairie or in some other open area as well
lol. Yup. Though not so far that it was hard to visit people or have them over. That would be sad.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I’m trying to figure out exactly when they were hurt. I think for Joseph, it was when Asher grabbed his leg, and for Asher, it was when he tumbled into the cobblestones.
Yeah, you’ve got it. But honestly, think about it. Have you ever seen boys play some wild ball/tackle/wrestle/race game? Now put that game on a cobble-stone s…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Well, it would depend on if he was serving time in the same part of the country as he’s in now. The smaller the town/city he was in, the more well known it would be. etc.
And also, what kind of job he was trying to get. If he wanted one that payed well then he would need to show his records, and then that would depend on the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
YES!v Show us please!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Let’s just hope that no one knows that he’s been out of prison for around 2 years following a 5-year sentence😬
Where was he serving time?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
I am so glad!!!!! I know exactly what it’s like to be in a rut and then have someone throw out a bunch of ideas and suddenly have answers. Glad I could be of help
Okay, well you have two separate issues here.
German nationality is one. If Leon can prove that he was a Jew in a concentration camp, either from papers of…[Read more]
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HighScribe replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Sorry if you guys are waiting for me to RP. I haven’t really known what to write for some reason 🤷♀️
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Aw! I love them so much!!!!!
So sweet!
Oh, thank you so much! I need to look into that!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Wow. They are gonna have trouble in life. lol.
Okay, ideas.
Leon
Most likely, Leon is going to stay away from downtown areas, bars, and maybe police stations if that makes him think of German law enforcement during the war. There were a lot of parades, dances, and celebrations after the war, and I’m pretty sure he’d not…[Read more]
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