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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
no, it makes perfect sense.
He’s an awesome character and I wanna see him more.
He’s my favorite so I want him to die.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
WHAT! NO!! A character like Alec needs a lot more spotlight!!!
He also needs to die.
I WANNA READ CHAPTER 13!!
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Rax and Ben
Rax was excited when he heard Eddie’s response. “Great! Wonderful!” You could never see a smile as big on anyone’s face as on Rax’s. He was filled with joy, for he liked dancing, even though he had only danced formally once or twice, but that made him more excited that he would dance formally again. And to top it…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Sorry I’m late. Busy today. But, I think it’s a little longer than normal. 🙂
“Thank you so much for the meal, Liesl. It was wonderful,” Julian said.
Liesl smiled. “I’m glad you liked it.”
“So, what are we doing today?” Roland asked. A…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
great progress!!!
I love this chapter! You really suck me into the game planning which is great because I normally find scenes like this super boring in books. It’s crazy but whatever you did has made it so that I can completely picture the game!!
I sure like Cole.
When’s Alec coming back? he was my favorite!! *puppy…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I wrote it seriously, but looking back at it it’s kinda funny, lol. I’m glad you found it funny
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
By the way, Syph has no problem dancing with girls. He just is trying to understand how it would work if you weren’t in competition.
Syph is so funny, lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
tbh, I am also confused about the teachings XD And I do wonder why. But also I get this feeling of fullness after going to confession. So whatever it is, I think I am going to stick to it! Also thanks for the prayers. I won’t be able to get back to anyone for a while btw. I AM GOING SKIING! ^o^
I agree, it does help to tell oth…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@loppylin @anyoneelse
Also, I don’t think I remember what your characters look like either?
Here’s a pre-written description of Rax:
Rax was a tall, tan skinned man. His eyes were light blue, filled with emotion. He had long grey hair often tied into a manbun. His clothes were baggy, pants and shirt, but he wore no shoes. On his arms were t…
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Andrew replied to the topic How do your other interests/hobbies bleed into your writing? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 3 months ago
I like fire, so I have a MC who is a pyromancer :}
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*blinks a couple of times* … *blinks a couple more times*
I had to go so far to try and find the last Sypher and Twins RPs XD. I guess that’s what I get for not being on for almost a week (I should probably read up on what Alpha and Dante are doing since there seems to be a lot of noise coming from over there… 👀👀👀)
Rax and…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Should I put a picture of Emmie in Alpha’s pocket or would that be too mean?
DO IT!!! Alpha would be so mad XD
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Andrew replied to the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Tip for everyone: learn how to fight, this will make writing fight scenes much better (sorry Ruth, that might be very helpful for you)
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Andrew replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
Sorry for not responding sooner, I was on a missionary trip to our sister church in Uganda.
What are your thoughts on catholic reconciliation?
I am not against the idea, I actually support it in a sense. Though, I think it should not just be isolated to your priest/pastor. but to trustworthy friends and family as well. Talk…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
okay hahahaha sounds good lol
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
no I haven’t!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Doesn’t everyone have at least a fragment of virtue though? (Sorry, I don’t mean to shut down everything you’re saying, this is just my thoughts. 😅) I’m not saying they have to be someone that the readers will look up to and be like, “Oh my word I want to be just like them.” I understand mankind is sinful and there probably are people out there t…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Now, you mentioned your characters not knowing God. And I liked how you put that—“without God there is no hope.” But…you have to think that these characters are probably looking for hope, right? Even just an occasional thought of wishing there was a way out of this darkness they’re living in.
So I know with where they’re at right now,…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
idk, KP actually glitched one time because highscribe called me such things so it blocked me for being a threat or something. I’m gonna look back and see what she said. I may end up doing it and scaring a few newbies.
Well, because the pocket knife is replaceable. Change isn’t too hard to come by. The picture….. well he can’t get…[Read more]
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