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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
So you thinking he’s gonna be your fav?
Oh fun! I’ll hunt you up when I feel like getting in an argument. XD XD
yes, you did call it.
How loyal are these people to thier gods? From this, I would guess that they wouldn’t be willing to die for them.
Not many Romans (or people who shared such a culture) were. T…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m so glad you liked the change!! One of my favorite scenes, honestly!
I have a passion for debating (kind of like Julian…..) and so I really got into it! It was so fun!
Julian is amazing
haha! Why’s that?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
The next morning, the four sat about the campfire and discussed their next course of action.
“So, where to now?” Roland asked.
Leon rolled up his cloak and pushed it into his rucksack. “I say we keep pushing toward the Capital and s…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
yes, but the video looks NOTHING like the website does on my computer……
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I don’t see myself in there.
I don’t see anyone.
i hate navigating new websites. lololol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Spending too much
money on books. Again.
To-Read list never
seems to get smaller.idk if that’s a bad thing…….. XD
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
WHAT IN THE WORLD!!!
Oh you’re gonna pay for that.
If they’re tent is full up maybe we can snag one together if I join.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
idk why it’s unfortunate that the first is true for you! It’s true for me too! 😁
The drawings are coming along. I started all three last night. I threw away the one for theducktator because she didn’t turn out the way i wanted her to, so I’ll have to start over. I finished Hybridlore’s, and Carrot Cake is almost done. I like…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
*gaspeth!*
Rory lost his date!
Hahahah!!!
Not that dancing would have been good for him. He would have freaked out and killed something or run……… buts still. It’s the principle of the matter. *British sniff*
lololololololol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
That blasted group is constantly threatening me and stealing my characters. *crosses arms indignantly*
lolololol
And, I’m sorry, but after meeting you in person, you’re too sweet to be a psychopath <3
Aw, thanks!! That’s so kind of you! 🙂
It’s a title I earned on KP after threatening a character Highscribe liked. XD I guess I’m…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay…. yes that about matches them!
You haven’t mentioned their biggest character difference which is a slight flaw for each of them. We’ll see if it gets picked up later on. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Worth All the World in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Sorry I’m just now getting to this!!!!
My main critique would be that you spend a lot of time on dialogue. I kind of feel like we just got thrown into the story and all we know about the characters is because of what they say. Maybe breaking up some dialogue and really showing us who they characters are would help…it kind of feels l…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay I can change that. It won’t do anything to the plot.
Lol 😂😂 I like Roland
haha, me too.
Poor Leon. He is now stuck with two impulsive companions.
Also, I’m starting to see the personality differences between Julian and Leon and I love them 😍
ME TOO!!!!!
Just out of curiosity and to see if I’m getting everything across, w…[Read more]
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