Linus Smallprint

@the_lost-journal

Oops, I missed that we couldn’t vote Piper. Paisley then.

@the_lost-journal

Piper

@the_lost-journal you’re welcome

@the_lost-journal

Paisley

@whalekeeper

Okay sounds good

@whaley @theducktator

Mateo

Mateo looked at his little fellow, and conceded, putting his captive down. Well… it was more of a drop.

@hybridlore

Yeah, I had considered it…. but they wouldn’t work together.

@whalekeeper @loopylin

tbh, may would be probably best

@keilah-h

well good.

@keilah-h    @hybridlore

Exactly. She is not a love interest.

Also, another reason her and julian interacting  a lot wouldn’t be a good idea is because she has not had good involvment with men so she is really, really raw in that area and needs extra space.

@the_lost-journal

Psst, Phillip. Get rid of Piper next, will you?

@hybridlore

No problem. I guessed I’d get your attention with the second scene rather then the first. 😂

Well, I mentioned that Julian didn’t ever go down there, so his reputation got around through gossip rather then his own words.

She will become a part of the church, but she and Julian will not really have any scenes together. 1, it’s not…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I could see people getting confused and overwhelmed since there’s so many of them hahaha

This reminded me of a time a visitor to our church told my dad that the number of kids he had intimidated her. She was completely serious and never came back. There were only four of us at the time too. XD

@keilah-h

Yep that’s true.

YES!! Thank you! It is!

@hybridlore

If you can pause a moment in your sorrow over Leon, what did you think of the scene with Julian and Rosalind?

@hybridlore

Yeah. A friend told me to split it or else he’ll wait to read it when he’s in solitary confinement. 😂

@keilah-h

Yeah! I’m glad you mentioned Julian. Most of the focus seems to be on Leon. I wonder why………… 🤔🤣

Do you think I’m really gonna tell you that?

one thing I’ll suggest, is that I feel like you don’t really introduce the family to us in the first few chapters. At first I wasn’t even sure if Blake was their sibling or not XDXD

They do have a HUGE family, so setting a solid foundation and making all the siblings and the parents unique and established in our minds would be a big thing you…[Read more]

@esther-c

Sorry it took me so long to get to this!!!
I like it a lot!!!! <3 keep it up!!!!

@hybridlore

I don’t know. You see, because I split Leon and Julian’s story, this book got to 1200+ book pages, so I’m going to cut it in half, but it’s still one full book on the Word Document. I think we only have about 100 Word Doc pages left before the place I planned to split the book, but I could be mistaken.

@loopylin

I love those! 🤣

@hybridlore

Hmm, I’m not sure.

I think we have close to 100 pages left.