@linus-smallprint
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
(I’m watermarking them just because I’m paranoid. Sorry)
Understandable. That’s why I created links to the artwork I shared yesterday instead of uploading them to Kingdom Pen directly, so I can revoke them later if I want to.
Oh, do you want to see the ones from LTBL or TVON?
Tough choice. Hmm… what about… both!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Thank you again!
You’re welcome!
I have a good deal of the illustrations done. Would you be interested in looking them over once I scan them in to the laptop? If you don’t have the time then that’s totally fine. I can ask my editor her thoughts. I would just be interested in the opinion of another artist.
Sure thing! Would lov…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 5 days ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 5 days ago
I use gloves.
Interesting. I feel like I would have to get used to that first before I could use it effectively. Another strategy I have heard it put a clean piece of paper between your hand and the drawing.
My dad has some thick plastic ones he uses when dealing with drug evidence. (He’s a Detective.)
That’s cool! (Though I bet h…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 5 days ago
He looks great! What kinda creature is he? I see he’s kinda like a kentor, but more elk-ish and less man.
Thank you!
Iskyagus was at one point a kentor. However, he know longer is. More on this soon when I start working on Book II.
The way you did his legs is very cool–digitigrade/unguligrade bipeds are hard (you can ask me, I have fou…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 weeks, 5 days ago
The socks one is so true. It applies to musicians as well.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Guess what time it is? It’s time for *drumroll*…
The Veil of the Night Book Feedback
Just a reminder that my feedback is just my opinion. You by no means have to follow it, but I hope it will help give you a better understanding of the areas in your book that do well and the areas that need some work. Please let me know if…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Thanks!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@whalekeeper @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Oh boy, a whole discussion about dragon riding warrior girls.
Nope, I have no plans to turn Martha into a warrior girl. My whole goal with her is to create a female character who is neither a Damsel in Destress nor a Mary Sue. So don’t worry about that.
If Martha rides a dragon, it will be out of…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Nice! We can form the left-handed Canadians club!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Honestly, I think this was actually okay. God gives strength, understanding, peace, awareness, revelation, and courage in the time He has chosen for the people who are receiving it.
Those were my thoughts. Even though it felt like the climax was too soon for Alan, I know that if a Christian is persecuted a week after he…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Thanks!
He doesn’t look completely sinister, but there’s something about him that doesn’t sit quite right. You know what I mean?
Well, that fits. Remember, he was able to trick Cyrus into trusting him.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Here is the full reference sheet. This is the first time I have done one of these. Newer drawings are to the left. I’m left-handed, so I have to do it backwards if I want to avoid smudging my work.
Having antlers on your back would be very inconvenient. But sometimes you have to sacrifice comfort for looks.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Just drew the villain of my series for the first time. I probably should have experimented around some more, but I kind of like the look and feel of him here. His name is Iskyagus.
@keilah-h @whalekeeper @stephie @ellette-giselle @theducktator
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
I should say thank you to you for providing reasons to keep it as well and reminding me that I can’t please everyone. One of my struggles is that I always try to, but deep down I know I can’t.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
*plays how to train your dragon theme song*
By the way, did you read what I decided to do with my magic system? You were the one who was encouraging me to keep it the way it was the most. While I have made my choice and am going to stick with it, I am curious to see what you think.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
(You can do whatever you want with them, to be clear. :p)
I know. But I think they would end up together, so I think I will let it happen. Sometimes it’s just interesting to watch your characters do their own thing.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
This is a list of all the suggestions of romance between Alan and Martha – that I can find.
Wow.
Some of those were not meant to be that. Martha was always just a little older than Alan even before I had any ideas of putting them together. I can see why everyone (including myself) ends up wanting them to marry.
You missed o…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Thank you very much for the feedback! I few comments/questions I have on it:
You also got me rooting for a romance between Martha and Alan! Don’t know whether that was intentional or whether us readers were just like “get them together.”
Not completely intentional. When I started working in this I put my foot down, saying ‘no roman…[Read more]
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