Linus Smallprint

@theshadow

Just reading over this now. I pretty much agree with what everyone else has said. In the words of Andrew Peterson, “Sometimes it is necessary to paint the sky black in order to show how beautiful is the prick of light.” Writing something dark is not bad if we use it to glorify God. If you still feel uncomfortable writing about…[Read more]

This link contains The Chapter Before – Chapter the 5th. I am going to try to finish up Chapter the 6th by the end of this week.

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/1iX8XDs

Taking some more people who have expressed interest in my story.

@highscribeofaetherium, @grcr, @keilah-h, @theducktator, @theshadow, @stephie, @theloonyone, and @thearcaneaxiom

Again, don’t feel pressure to follow this if you don’t want to/are too busy.

@loopylin

I’m back now. Thank you for volunteering to crack down on me! I will start a separate form in Novel Critique Requests for this. I will tag you.

@keilah-h and @rae

do you have a picture of Tenz? A drawing, faceclaim picture, anything? – Keilah

You DO NOT want to see me previous drawing attempts. They were just creepy. I don’t really have anything else though…I’ll try drawing a picture that’s actually good for once. – Rae
 

I don’t know if a drawing was going to be shared here or not, bu…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

More questions!

All right, here we go:

What outer plot is your protagonist/s dealing with?

Not entirely sure what outer plot means, but I have an idea and I will try to answer this question from that.

The outer plot of TNPT involves finding redemption in The Saviour and clinging to him down the narrow path, no matter what the…[Read more]

@loopylin

I relate.

Hi @ellette-giselle,

I don’t know if you would be interested, but we have some challenges going on right now where you sketch a character based on a description provided getting as close to what the author imagined as possible. It is just for fun, with the rewards being writing and drawing experience. We just wrapped one up for my character,…[Read more]

@loopylin

He is unable to turn his ‘hands’ upside down, the same way you cannot bend your leg so that your foot is facing backwards.

Why did I feel the need to try this after you mentioned it? I think I might have pulled something.

I did get one foot backwards, though

Don’t injure yourself because of my writing. It, well… hurts, you know? Man…[Read more]

@rae

I will see what I can do in my free time.

@highscribeofaetherium

No worries! I actually may not be entering the next challenge due to going on vacation next week, so it depends on how much free time I have to draw. Sorry, @rae

@keilah-h, @grcr, @theshadow, and @loopylin

Thank you again all for entering, this was a lot of fun! I look forward to the next challenge! Speaking of which, @rae, you can post a description of one of your characters when you are ready!

@keilah-h, @grcr, @theshadow, and @loopylin

Keilah: When I first saw your drawing, I would get after you made the wrong eye blind. However, I realized that I said the left eye was blind in the description when I meant to say the right. It would be unfair to judge you based on that then. You are the only one who remembered the extra sleeves for…[Read more]

@keilah-h, @grcr, @theshadow, and @loopylin (since this is just for fun and I appreciate having a 4th entry, I will include your drawing in judging as well)

Thank you all for your submissions! I am currently judging them and will announce the winner soon. A reminder, I am judging based on accuracy, not on drawing skills. I will give each of you…[Read more]

@rae

No worries!  You don’t have to start right on the heels of me finishing.

@ellette-giselle

OK, in answer to Linus’ question, Viktor, Leonid, and Katerina were upset about the separation. However, they hardly saw their parents to begin with because of the amount they had to work just to survive. Viktor cared for his little siblings and so they took it less hard then had they been separated from each other. Natalia was g…

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@stephie, @grcr, @highscribeofaetherium, @loopylin, @theshadow, @theducktator, @keilah-h and @ava-blue

Last day to submit a drawing of Charles!

I will decide tomorrow who won and reveal my drawing, then the floor will be yours @rae.

@theducktator

No worries, after this one is done we will see who wants to do the next description

@loopylin

There is still one day to enter if you wish!