Linus Smallprint

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you!

@keilah-h, @stephie, @loopylin, @theshadow

My goal for this week is to write and post Chapter the 7th.

@ellette-giselle

Just finished reading what you posted. So far I like it. What time period would this take place in? I’m imagining Arron in a T-shirt for some reason, but I highly doubt this is set in recent times. In some ways, this reminds me of the books my sister writes. She also writes stories that take place in fictional worlds but could…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Looking and squinting at your cover, my eye goes right to the character’s faces. Good. I think the colour contrast is good. I wonder if there is a way to make the title stand out more from the illustration. I think @koshka has some good advice for improvement.

Now I know you are not supposed to judge a book by its cover, but…[Read more]

@theducktator

If you start something, feel free to tag me!

I do have a few people following mine now, but if you would like to join, here is the link. (https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/the-narrow-path-trilogy-book-i-the-cost/)

@theducktator

I usually don’t look at the maps, but I do like having them. There have been some books lacking them, and that makes it confusing to look at where everything is. In the series I am currently reading, I have referenced the map only a few times. I just finished book three. I am more likely to look at a map if it has some illustrations…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Take it away when you are ready!

@keilah-h, @stephie, @loopylin, @theshadow, and @savannah_grace2009

Thank you all for showing interest in following TNPT. Here is Chapter the 6th! The link is set to expire on August 12. Please let me know what you think of the three groups mentioned. Also, I am curious to know what you think of Alan’s character so far. I feel like I have the…[Read more]

@rae

Thank you for the challenge and the feedback! I like the shading of the hair on your drawing. This character is a lot darker than he appears to be, isn’t he?

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @theductator

Who would like to submit the next description?

@savannah_grace2009

I think I started using Reedsy because of your suggestion. I like it a lot, it has a nice design and it is good to have everything in one place, which makes it convenient. Sharing chapters is very easy! It does have its downs, like limited formatting and sometimes it is a little annoying to get around, but I have switched to…[Read more]

@theshadow

Sure thing, you can follow it as well. I have the chapters set to expire August 6, so you still have plenty of time to catch up. Thank you for your interest!

@keilah-h

Yeah, I kind of imagine Oliver’s tail might thump along behind him as he is descending a stair case.

I am working on Chapter the 6th right now. I hope to finish it by Saturday.

@loopylin

Thank you! Glad you are enjoying it.

Hmm…

Is it that I am spending too much time explaining things, introducing too many things, or a bit of…

@ellette-giselle

Just so you know, I am willing to follow this and give you feedback as well. I don’t think I will get to it today, but I will let you know when I have some feedback. Please tag me for any updates!

@keilah-h

This is a bit older, I’ve changed his uniform since, but here is some artwork of Oliver.

@ellette-giselle

Oh! You’re reading the first chapter! Wow that was some time ago.

I was on vacation last week, and am catching up on posts where people tagged me.

Ah yeah, sorry about that. And yes, the reason Sara couldn’t hide was because Don had to stall the agents while Sara closed the hiding place. You see, they all three were supposed to…

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@ellette-giselle

Looking back, I think I may have interpreted Sara and Jonathan’s mother as two separate characters. Whoops.

First time on the Chat Chat. I’m feeling a little overwhelmed…

@ellette-giselle

I read the chapters you posted. Poor Jonothan. And I thought my character had a tragic backstory! I am wondering though, did Don know that he, his wife, and his daughter would all be killed? If so, why did he not hide his wife and daughter as well?

@theshadow

You’re welcome! Happy to help!

@keilah-h and @stephie

Thank you! Any consecutive feedback or more details on what you liked about it?

@rae

I did have some time to work on a sketch. I’m also experimenting a bit with coloured pencils here. Sorry, as you can see, I did not color the whole thing and did not clean it up either. Please use the drawing at the top left for my submission.