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@highscribeofaetherium

You got me there. I should have known.

@highscribeofaetherium

Did you say ‘legos’? Ouch! That’s more painful than stepping on Lego bricks!

@whalekeeper

Nice! Reminds me of how we attacked problems in my Web Development & Design courses. This was more focused on design and problem-solving, but some similarities exist. Throw up all the ideas on a wall, and get them out of your head so that you can think a little more. That helps you to think a little more about the places where ideas…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle and @theshadow

All right, thank your for your feedback!

@keilah-h

Thank you for the suggestion! However, you are missing something. Are there a limited amount of words related to lions? Yes, yes there are. But when it comes to spelling? Oh ho ho! That is my playground! Take for example ‘Cub’, the most common word to use for a lyen name. Now how can we mess with the…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings, @ellette-giselle, @savannah_grace2009, @theshadow

Thank you for your help. I think this gives me some ideas. Not all of these seem to fit my character, so I may try to lean into sarcasm as I feel that this fits better. “Great. Just Great.” However, I think you have given me some ideas for some other characters as well. Words…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Turlay? I don’t know if you’ve read the Wingfeather Saga, but this was similar to what Turin did.

I think this reveals a bit about Turin. It seems either he trusts people, or he doesn’t. If you are a stranger, he is going to be suspicious of you. If you manage to earn his trust, you have a loyal friend who is willing to…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009, @keilah-h, @stephie, @loopylin, @theshadow

Next Chapter! I finished a little early this week. It’s from Tyn’s perspective for all you Tyn fans. To be honest, most of what occurred in this chapter I did not know would happen until after I sat down to write.

Since I finished early, I am going to use the rest of this week to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

The Jonathan Park cliffhanger music is going through my head after that last scene. What was Sabina doing during this?

@ellette-giselle

Probably not, sorry. Romance is not the most appealing to me. The closest you get to making me want to read it is that your back cover lets me know this is a Christian book and is similar to The Princess Bride (which is one romance story I do enjoy due to its witty nature. I am curious to know though, is your book witty in this…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yes, I think this is more intriguing. The layout here also looks cleaner than the last one.

@keilah-h

The due date sounds good.

@keilah-h

All right, it’s on!

What just happened here?

@ellette-giselle

I like how Turin calls Arron ‘stranger’ once more.

Typo alert here:

“Well, I guess I’ll go back to the house and try to talk with Sabina. I can’t see it going ver well,” sighed Turin.

@ellette-giselle

That image does clear it up, thank you!

Some feedback for you.

I do like how it takes time for the Gospel to get through to Turin. I know that feeling of trying to tell someone about it, thinking I would be able to convince them, but to no avail. Sometimes it is a little easy to forget that it is God who softens peoples hearts…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sorry for the late reply, had another busy weekend. I think option #7 is the best for your covers.

@theducktator

Banana #8

@keilah-h

Okay, sounds good, You are taking a course in animation?

@savannah_grace2009

Sure, I can!