Linus Smallprint

@ellette-giselle

What’s that suposed to mean?!

Do I need to fix it or what?!?

Nothing you need to fix. Just the protagonist makes a choice at the end of Dune that saves lives, but isn’t good, and the girl he like goes something like ‘okay, whatever’, but in the movie, she is upset and doesn’t go along with it.

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@ellette-giselle

Sure, he can try. He’s been trying for the last few minutes. It’s not going to do much good. He’s a sixteen-year-old kid against several temple guards.

They’re going to win.

Common sence. Got it.

btw, why Nick? Everyone does “Bob” or “Bill” around here when they don’t know the name. 

Short for Nicodemus. That’s all I will explain…[Read more]

@theshadow

Okay, sounds fine, but you might want to check out Ellette’s profile first. She just put some warning there about using Google.

@ellette-giselle

The high priest stepped forward so that he was inches from Dietrich. “We will take you from the palace— there is no need to draw unwanted attention. Once we have reached the temple, I will put to death your traitorous servant.”

Diedrich felt a chill run down his spine, and he darted a glance at Marius. His friend had strai…

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@ellette-giselle

Leon was dragged from the warm comfort of sleep by something sharp pricking his leg. He readjusted, shaking his leg, but something pinched him. “Ow!” he exclaimed, bending over to inspect the pricking.

At that moment, something whistled overhead and struck the chair. Leon hit the floor and rolled to a crouch, the annoying pai…

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@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapters 5 and 6 are out!

@hybridlore

Your welcome!

I really appreciate you going out of your way to try to help me understand.

Confession, I asked ChatGPT to code most of it, and then modified it from there.

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle

Okay, I think you all have me convinced now. I will rethink Tyn’s behaviour in the opening later and will try to treat her fairer appearances later in the series.

@ellette-giselle

 Dude. You are so mean. 😝

😏

Yes, but Wilhelm is the traditional spelling. 😁 (you still say it Vwilhelm)

Ah. That makes sense.

@ellette-giselle

I know you are curious, so here was my thought process while reading this:

With him was a young man who appeared to be in his mid to late teens.

Another teenage boy? How many does she have and why is she introducing another one? Or is she? Because if this is the prince in disguise then she couldn’t just go change his…[Read more]

@theducktator @ellette-giselle @stephie

Autocorrect in 1st draft be like:

Except maybe the slave part. It dosen’t feel odd that all the slaves are men, even if there could be, and have been female slaves.

@ellette-giselle

This is a big step for me! I used to only write people my own age or eighteen. Eighteen was the magic year that was always perfect to write. 😂

I know. I like to write characters that are that age as well. Alan, Martha, Eric, James, and Tyn are all not too far from that (Oliver’s a few years older).

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@keilah-h

But that makes me think. Maybe there should be other books set in this universe besides the Narrow Path trilogy. You have an equivalent to all the continents, and species to inhabit them, but TNP only focuses on New Sahvanna for obvious reasons, and we only really get to see the lyens’ culture (unless the third book has them traveling t…

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@whalekeeper

And also, nice drawing! I now understand. XD I thought she was a lot less humanoid.

Thank you! Kentor are the most human of all the non-human races. I have a reason for this in the lore, but may not explore it in this series. Hint: it has to do with Kunulfs, the other species native to the area, being more animal than normal.

With…

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@hybridlore

Sorry, I meant to say below.

So if I’m understanding what you’re saying, with the way code works, a possible explanation for the mysterious box is that someone accidentally deleted the part of the code that told the page to ignore it?

Yes, basically. Think of it like a green traffic light saying go (–>), but the traffic lights nev…[Read more]

@keilah-h @theducktator @ellette-giselle @stephie @whalekeeper

Chapter the 4th is out!

@keilah-h

Thank you!

by the way, will we ever see more gorbs? I kinda miss your humorous Australian lizard people.

Not likely. Don’t forget that gorbs are enemies of the lyens, so to find one in a lyen country, like Oliver, is rare.