Linus Smallprint

@ellette-giselle

Ah, okay.

In that case, I don’t want to dig into it too much at the moment, since his character is going nowhere else in book 1, but I definitely am planning to deal with this in book 2. Maybe I will see if I can add a sense of shame into the end of that last chapter, but that will be it.

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@ellette-giselle

Yup. Sure did. My dad was stationed in Italy, and there you travel by REAL trains. With several carriages and an engine. We used to spend our vacations in Edelweiss Germany up in the alps. I’ve also been to Austria, Rome, Greece, and Switzerland. I wish I could do it again now that I’m older and can appreciate it. Although, liv…

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@ellette-giselle

Ugh. It deleted my reply.

Try Ctrl A then Ctrl C before you post your reply to save it to your clipboard in case it decides not to work. Then you don’t have to retype anything. (Make sure you are on the ‘Text’ tab of the text editor.)

I feel like you kinda brushed over the shame thing with Eric, and I’m hoping that’s because he’…

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@ellette-giselle

*gasp*!!!! You stole my book!!!!!!!! How dare you!!!

I dare. And I’ll do it to this one too! Ha ha!!! (Also, you are at 8 exclamation marks now. I think I have good grounds to be concerned.)

Oh my goodness! Did you just say “taking the train to school”!!!! THAT IS AWESOME!!! I used to take trains a lot when I lived in Europe, but…

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@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow

Next chapter. This was getting a little long and I realized I didn’t have too much planned for chapter the 26th, so I decided to move the climax of the rescue into the next chapter. I should hopefully get that to you by the end of this week.

Chapter the 25th – The Rescue

@ellette-giselle

Listened to the song. I hadn’t heard of this before. The song does fit well.

Yes, it is a time jump!!!! If it’s too jolting, I may split the sections into parts. I’ll see what Linus says.

You could do different parts. Right now, the first part kind of feels like a separate story to what you are getting into now, but you may end…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I had no idea what that picture was from. i just saw the meme the other day and thought of it. It was perfect.

Ah, okay. It’s from a show that people had been recommending to me for a while, and I have finally had a chance to start watching it. The meme fits with the personality of the older character in it well.

Let’s just say, a…

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@the_lost-journal

Fun! I was slightly confused with the first section at the end because I did not realize that the portal appeared because of the Storyteller’s writing.

@whalekeeper

I just decided to read that chapter completely out of order. I’ve only read up to chapter 5 besides this, I think, and that was a while ago. XD I can give some feedback about this chapter, as someone who read it without any context whatsoever. 

You know that reading books like this is the number one cause of cancer in domesticated fr…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, well i don’t like him very much. he seems weak and kinda sulky. I mean. I don’t know, he’s a coward, and I don’t like cowards. I feel a redemption arch, but at the moment it’s hard to see. So yeah, I’m hoping for redemption, but I’m not liking him right now.

Ah, okay.

@ellette-giselle

By the way, you keep on interrogating me about Leon. So I want to interrogate you on Eric. What do you think about him now? Where do you think things are going to go for him?

@ellette-giselle

I guess it would not be beyond Tyn to try to break off from the other soldiers and see if she can contribute more. I’ll see what I can do with that. Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

Just watching Avatar the Last Airbender for the first time with my sibling in. 12 Chapters into Book 1 right now. Prince Zuko and his uncle have been my favourite characters so far.

Lol. It’s very affective. Trust me…………..

Sounds like you are speaking form experience here.

well I want Joseph to have SOME faith. Plus, its easy…

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@ellette-giselle

Here is the unfinished chapter. (Anyone else who want to read it and/or help me out can as well)

https://editor.reedsy.com/s/n8oETFK

@ellette-giselle

Give me five minutes please, and I will try to post what I have written so far so that you will have the context you need. Warning, there may be more inconcitecies/grammer mistakes in here than usual. And this is going to be a long chapter. (I might split it into two for my third draft.)

(Oh, you know what would really smart? Is…

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@the_lost-journal

Yup. That fits. I think I deserved that.

@ellette-giselle

If you could share a bit more detail I might have an easier time coming up with ideas.

Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)

Eric was hiding by the blockade, where he was waiting for any of the rescued Faithful to show up. However, he made the mistake of hiding to close and was spotted when some soldiers dismounted to see if they…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

Its, its… BEAUTIFUL!!! 😭😭😭😭 I am crying TEARS of JOY!

Thank you.

Is the magic potato going to answer my poorly poetic question, or am I going to just have to trust it has good intentions?

@ellette-giselle

There was a little box holding the ring that had been his mother’s. Her favorite shawl was folded beside his father’s hunting knife. His very own Bible lay with the treasures, and beside it were several shiny stone from the creek that flowed through his father’s farm. Joseph leaned forward and set the papers gently back into the b…

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@ellette-giselle

Forgot your tag on the previous post