Linus Smallprint

@ellette-giselle

Sorry to make you depressed. I know I do have a tendency to see the negative over the positive. (Just ask my sister, Ellie, about the feedback I give her on her books!) Others like Liberty and Hybridlore seem to be enjoying it, though, so don’t you take my feedback as a sign that this shouldn’t be written. I know Leon is one of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yikes! Bad Smaug!

btw, do you still need me to wait until April now that you sent this?

I suppose you could start earlier.

@ellette-giselle

https://1drv.ms/w/c/bcdce8f567320b25/ETDxCG51PcpJg0VV9oF5LxAB-hfZiwM2BGSvsV_bbcIq3w?e=sauIgi

That’s a messy looking link, that is. You should click on it. It might contains some Book feedback!!

Hopefully, Microsoft Word is still acceptable.

I didn’t get around to rereading the book this time. But this is what my thoughts…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Yeah. Plus, Martha would be more comfortable if she wasn’t alone with a bunch of guys. It would be better if Eric was awake, but since he’s not, she’s glad Sara is there.

@keilah-h

That’s a fine mecha dragon!

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter 12 out now!

I was talking to my sister last night about the story, and we decided on a couple of things that would make us both more comfortable reading and writing in the story, which would also make things less awkward for the characters. However, I still will not rewrite…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter the 11th is out. I’m not too happy with this. I’m not sure I got Martha right in here and this kind of feels like a filler event. (Though it still moves the story forward.) I will press on.

@ellette-giselle

*Considers playing The Game on brothers*

Nah, way too risky.

Probably

@ellette-giselle

Yes

@whalekeeper

How come I am not supprised that you are the only one here who knows about The Game? (Which you just lost, again.)

@ellette-giselle

The game where you do not think about the game, for if you think about the game, then you have lost the game.

Rules:

• If you know about The Game, you are playing it. (Some people say that everyone is playing The Game, whether they know about it or not.) You cannot refuse to play.
• Whenever you think about The Game, you lose.

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I have a friend who has a 30 minute timer on his phone so that he can remind his girl friend about it.

@loopylin

I do what I can.

@keilah-h

Apparently, you do not understand The Game.

No one wins The Game. Everyone who plays it has lost it at least once. But now that you have heard about it, you have no choice but to play it.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Game_(mind_game)

@the_lost-journal

Actually, that is pretty accurate to what we get here. Every when we think spring is almost here and the snow is almost gone, we get a big dump at least a foot deep.

Weather, weather, weather, whether you like it or not. Weather, weather, weather, whether it’s cold or hot.  🎶

@keilah-h

The Game is The Game where you don’t think about The Game. If you think about The Game, you have lost it. So, by getting me to explain The Game, you made me lose it, and now you have lost it again.

Happy April Fools!

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter the 10th out now!

I know. I know. I may have ruined the whole book for you.  You will by no doubt recognize what it is. I tried to disguise it, and add in some extra things, but those attempts to hide it were in vain. If you haven’t heard of it before, then I’ve corrupted…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @stephie @theducktator @ellette-giselle @keilah-h

Chapter the 9th out now!

@keilah-h

My brother asks “why construction?”

Once the snow finally melts, road work begins everywhere. Getting anywhere without at least going through one construction zone is hard.

Quite the seasons you got down there. Do you have a personal favourite?