@linus-smallprint
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
“We’ve become the church’s messenger service,” Julian added with a chuckle.
How much do these guys travel in a week?
Hah! linus-smallprint and I called it!! 😆
Yup. Totally called that.
I think @hybridlore has a good point. Joseph also mentioned in the letter that he has been studying this subject, so we know he’s doing it. Hyb…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Here is the next chapter. Are you ready? Things are about to get darker.
Another thing. My school courses are finishing up so I have more time to write again! My goal is to get you the epilogue by the end of the year.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Yeah, that’s pretty much why I still watch it. Nostalgia, plus to cringe at the recent seasons :p
Cristalized wasn’t good, but Dragons Rising is not bad… except… I really don’t like the direction they are taking with Cole. I know it’s not official yet, but they are stepping as close to the line as they possibly can wi…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Hot take (actually this is more of an unknown take): Sons of Garmadon and Hunted were great seasons for Cole specifically.
I haven’t actually watched either of these seasons all the way through. I know they are considered some of the best of Ninjago, and from what I know of them, Lloyd is pushed through some very interesting cha…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I know I said I wasn’t officially back yet, BUT NOW I AM!
Welcome back! Oh, part 4!
The story teller threw the book onto the pile he had made and sat there, wandering what he was to do.
Wondering what he was to do?
“If I could write a story that explains this all, I might even become a famous historian!”
I was wondering what h…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
Well there was Master of the Mountian and Day of the Departed (but Day of the Departed wasn’t great. Cole acted more like Kai in it and the story didn’t really make sense.)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
The woman wiped her eyes with the corner of her skirt and took in several breaths before continuing in a steadier voice. “When I came here, I hoped there would be more freedom to worship as this town is so much smaller. But all I could see was evil. It was everywhere, and… and I almost gave up hope. Then, yesterday, this young…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I don’t know. I see that stuff really fast, but it might just be me. Do you want it to come as a shock?
It doesn’t need to be a shock. It might be fine then.
Those are my two guesses, but they both have problems.
Okay. I will say your second one is incorrect (remember, I told you earlier that I am trying to avoid demonic el…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic How Many MCs/POV Characters Is Too Many? in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
I would mostly agree with what other people are saying, but not quite. It is going to be easier to fit in more characters if you have a series over a stand-alone. However, I have read a few series that were long, but still had too many characters. Robert Jordan’s Wheel of Time was an example of this as well as the graphic novel…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
To say I didn’t know the minute Alan’s father made the plan would be lying.
I knew he was going to get caught.
Yeah, I suppose it was clear that would happen. Do you think it is too obvious?
Then I think it will flow much better for Alan,l and it totally makes sense for his character and fits very well.
Give him a different tra…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Early 1900s Research in the forum Historical 1 year, 3 months ago
Sorry. I don’t have any recommendations. I’m terrible when it comes to researching things myself. I could maybe ask my dad. He’s big into history.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Leon turned to Joseph and pressed something into his hand. “This is for you, from Sabina.”
I was kind of expecting it to take longer for a response to come in. But this isn’t a pacing issue this time. It’s fine we got one so quickly and I was happy to see it.
I took the boy’s hand and told the soldiers he was my son, and I would…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Question for you after you read the section above (do not, I repeat, do not read this before).
Spaces to help hide the contents:
I already started working on the next chapter and realized that Alan’s reaction to the events in the previous chapter…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @stephie @keilah-h @theducktator @loopylin @theshadow @whalekeeper
Next chapter.
I’m trying to come up with a name for the village The Faithful find. Any suggestion?
Also, Ellette, I have included a sample of a casual conversation between guys. This can give you some ideas for some casual conversation for your male…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Looks good. This will definitely help it not to feel too fast.
At that moment, the door crashed open. Ezra jumped, and Joseph started to his feet, gripping the arm of his chair so tightly his hands went white.
“Hello father! I didn’t expect you home so soon!” Quin exclaimed as he bounded into the room.
Didn’t your mother teach…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
But I was thinking… Maybe I… uhh… unofficially quit KP?
I’m sorry to hear that. Well, thank you for the potatoes! That was fun and ironically accurate. I am also looking forward to the conclusion of your story!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @theducktator
Two snowballs? Not fair!
I would throw back a lot of snow, but for some reason, it’s warm here in Canada, and our snow is melting (I think it’s 6°C today)
Okay, here we go.
Once upon a time, there was a boy. The boy, like many boys, was named John. And like many boys, he liked building snowmen. However, he had a…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
hey, has your sister tried to start an account here?
we have a new member called Mountain Maiden, but her profile is empty. No picture, no bio, no background, no posts. I tried messaging her but never got an answer, I was wondering if that was your sis and her welcome email went to spam or something. 🤷🏼♀️Nope, not her,…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic My Sister Published a Book in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@theshadow @stephie @ellette-giselle @grcr
Thank you to you all, Ellie appreciates it!
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